Reviews for The Island: Season One
| littlewiccan |
11/26/05 - 08:45AM |
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I like it. The thing with WIllow makes total sense. lol good job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much - glad you liked this thing with Willow :) |
| axel |
11/26/05 - 06:32AM |
4: Still Alive Pt 2 |
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Me again. sorry to bug you again, but I mean is Willow completly unable to use her power, because of the other power? Like say she was beging chased by bores, could she defend herself, with magic, or is she helpless?
Author's Response: Not a problem - especially since, well I left an incredibly long rant on your wrestling story, which you've probably noticed by now. Anyway, I honestly haven't really thought about it, but I'd say no, she can't defend herself with magic if a boar happened to attack. I think if she had any magical abilitiy, it would make life on the island far too easy. So, that leaves me with two options - either kill Willow off (which I don't want to do ... at least not in the near future anyway ... who knows about later??) or block her magic abilities. So, I'd say its more like the "other" power sensed Willow's, and, being the stronger of the two, immediately used a spell to incapacitate her powers so that there were no threats posed to this "other" power. I hope I'm making some sense - I know what I want to say, but it usually comes out messed up in writing. Hey, thanks again.
Author's Response: Oh, so I wanted to say also she hasn't "lost" them - meaning if they left the island tomorrow, she'd be her old Willow self. But on the island itself, her powers are being neutralized by something else. |
| always angel |
11/26/05 - 12:31AM |
4: Still Alive Pt 2 |
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Ah,the scene with the pilot. I still remember it all too well. Anyways great chapter. I love how you had Andrew say Charlie was Merry. For a moment there I thought Kate was gonna say the same thing b/c I forgot about Driveshaft lol. Great job, update soon.
Author's Response: The Andrew thing was admittedly cheesy, in my opinion, but I just had to add it. It just seems like something he'd say, and it was just too tempting :) And damn, I could've had Kate say that - it would've been amusing - having him hope she'd be thinking Driveshaft, but she was thinking LOTR. Maybe someone else can say it - Hurley might be a good canidate for that line :) Hey, thanks so much for the review. I really appreciate it!! |
| Sinister |
11/25/05 - 11:49PM |
4: Still Alive Pt 2 |
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Great update. I'm loving this story more and more. Very interesting what you did with Willow. I was starting wonder how you were going to work that since she's a godess now and all you would think she could get them out of anything. Great way to block that...it would just be too easy. As always...I'm loving your work. Amazing job!
Author's Response: Before I read your review, it hadn't even occured to me about Willow being a goddess. I was just thinking more along the lines of her just being really powerful ... but good point. Yeah, lol, it would've made things far to easy!! Thanks so much for the review, I really really appreciate it!! |
| axel |
11/25/05 - 09:59PM |
4: Still Alive Pt 2 |
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Great chapter! So has Willow lost all her powers, or just some of them? I wonder how long it will be, be for Locke figures out Buffy is a slayer (he figuers out everything) Good Job, and maybe the monster will eat Andrew (did I just say that?)
Author's Response: Hmm, I haven't really thought up a good explination yet for Willow's shortage of magic powers, but I don't think it's that she's lost them. I'm thinking more along the lines of there is something more powerful on the island that's canceling out her abilities - keeping her from making a connection to Kennedy and "calling" for help. And well, I gather you don't really like Andrew. I never had a problem with him, but truth is, maybe he will get the ax, just because I find it incredibly difficult to write for him. Hmm, and come to think of it, I haven't introduced Locke yet. For shame! I love his character - even though he's a little freaky at times. Yeah, he'd be the one to figure it out though. Thanks again for the review!! |
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