Reviews for Helping me through
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:34PM |
6: Chapter Five |
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| I agree, I like that she could see his soul in his eyes. Same advice about the dialoge thou, maybe instead of like this
"he"she"he"she"
more of a
"he"
"she"
"he"
etc with a tad more detail other than just convo, but its still a good story. |
| filmtheory |
11/23/05 - 12:00AM |
6: Chapter Five |
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I like how Lena could tell Spike wasn't evil by the glimmer in his eyes. Slayers should have a sixth sense about that sort of thing.
Author's Response: Yea they should. I never really understood why Buffy didn't. Well, she knew when Angel got his soul back in season 2 but she couldn't tell when Spike got is? I just didn't get that. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/20/05 - 09:39AM |
6: Chapter Five |
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Great chapter ... can't wait to see Lena's reaction! Again, lovely story so far. I'm really, really enjoying it!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. :) |
| axel |
11/18/05 - 11:15PM |
6: Chapter Five |
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Good chapter. Wish it was longer, but other than that, I liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks :) |
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