Reviews for In The Forests Of The Night
| always angel |
11/14/05 - 11:07PM |
12: Shattered Mirror |
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This chapter was awesome. Emotions ran high through the whole chapter and you could definatly feel them as you read. I liked that Angel got his revenge on The Night Ones. I just hope he lets Buffy help him. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you soo very much for all of the great support you have given Always Angel. You're one of the best!! As for Angel, he's one of those stubborn times that refuse to have Buffy help him but don't worry, he'll see what's coming to him he he. I will definitely update ASAP i already started work on the next chappie. Thank you sooooo much Always Angel for the awesome support!! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/14/05 - 07:33PM |
12: Shattered Mirror |
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WOW - I absolutely loved this chapter - so emotional and every detail was perfect. Angel's pain was palpable - the loss of his brother must be devestating, and I can feel that in every word on the page. This was a fabulous update - so intense!! I hope that Buffy can reach him because it hurt that he pushed her away, but it is understandable under the circumstances. I hope she can help, and that he realizes he can love again. This was such a beautiful chapter, and I'm so amazed by the entire story - the descriptions, the imagery, the characters - everything is just fantastic. Again, you've used quotes and song lyrics at all the right times - enhancing the story rather than detracting from it. I've noticed quotes can sometimes get in the way of a story, but definitely not here! They simply add to it and put more power and intensity behind the story itself. I love your quote choices, and you placed them well. I really, really do hope there is an update around the corner. Again, I love this!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooo very much Angels Shadow for your great input!! as always when i read your fabulous comments, i just want to give you a great big hug lol!! he he. As always, words cannot express my sincere gratittude and most of the awesome comments you made about my fic makes me feel the same way about your awesome kick ass Phantom fic. I cannot tell you how much i appreciate your comments on this every time i always look so forward to reading your awesome support on this. Angel felt his pain at his terrible loss and the emotions he experienced during this chappie was only natural. He's gonna be feeling a little bit at pushing Buffy away but he will come to his senses sooner or later i promise he he. i thought the quotes from Beauty and the Beasts and the lyrics for My Last Breath would be so perfect for this chappie so i decided to add them as well. quotes can distract readers sometimes but i made sure it didn't do that here when i added them. and yes there will be a update around the corner. promise and thank you sooo much for all your awesome ass kicking support Angels Shadow. You are truly one of the best and i really sincerely hope you'll update your Phantom fic super soon. im really dying to know what happens next!! Thank you so much!! i will update ASAP i got at least half of the next chappie done already. thank you for all of your wonderful support. i won't forget it!!! |
| Slayers Of The Night |
11/14/05 - 05:56PM |
12: Shattered Mirror |
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Hey partner. Hehe, that just sounds corny. Anyway, I love it! You're doing a great job! And I'm glad that you used the Call of the Wild quotes from Beauty and the Beasts. That's just always sounded so beautiful to me.
Author's Response: Hey there Partner lol!! don't worry it doesn't sound that corny when you use that line he he. Thanx i was really hoping to hear what you thought about the fic but im glad you like it. and yea i agree with the quotes from the beauty and the beastas episode. i really love the last line. "In the depths of the forest, a call still sounded." i love that line for some reason. But either way, thankx for the great awesome comments Partner and im so looking forward to working on the second fic together really really soon. and even if you didn't say it, i will update asap!! happy reading partner lol |
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