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MissEdith 02/22/06 - 06:27PM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
I really liked all the father/child interaction in this chapter. And I absolutely loved Willow's "don't tempt fate" line. It was HILARIOUS. I'm not quite sure why, but it really really really was.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the "tempting fate" line. I always worry my humor will fall flat. So happy that didn't happen.

dutchgirl 01/07/06 - 02:32PM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
I liked the confrontation between Connor and Angel, it reminded me of a scene towards the end of season 4 were Connor told Angel about Holtz practice game, if Angel had known that in the begining he would have known something was up when Connor returned and said he was oke with Holtz leaving him behind, of course I totally understand that Angel couldn't have known back than but he should have shown more interest in season 4, because to me the irony was that the entire apocalypse could have bin kept to a minimal and more of a happy ending if he would have but more effort in his son. And although Angel has bin trying to reconnect with him, because Connor has had a hard time with the Quortoth memories this is a little bit to hard on him so he snaps, I also like how the villain plot is moving along, I wonder where your planning to go with this, keep updating.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I totally agree with you assessment of season 4. Angel should have spent more time with his son to help the kid out AND prevent an apocalypse. My villains aren’t as well planned out as they are in “Running on Faith,” but I definitely have a direction I’m going. And yes, you have it EXACTLY; the weight of the Quar’toth memories weigh heavily on Connor and cause him to snap from time to time. Really, he should probably see a shrink. Well, a demon shrink maybe.

Quortoth 12/18/05 - 12:23PM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
I can't really said much in the reviews that I haven't said before. It's great. The Chapters make me want to read more. About Dawn and Conner, I don't quite feel the relationship between those characters in general. [Not in your writing of course, you pull that off well enough. Good.] I just don't get a good feeling, I'm not a Conner/Dawn shipper. :-P :-) Great work.

Author's Response: I’m glad you’re not a Dawn/ Connor shipper. Not that I’m against that relationship, but I hate how a lot of people bring that kind of bias to a story. I had a story where the two of them hated each other and someone e-mailed saying, “What’s with Dawn and Connor? Are they going to get together, because I don’t feel that.” I answered, “You probably don’t feel that because I didn’t put it in there at all.” I hope you don’t actively hate the relationship, either. If you just keep an open mind ‘ship wise, I’m pretty sure I can take you on a fun ride. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

spideygirl 11/16/05 - 09:43AM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
Wow, Buffy is a little harsh to Hank but come to think about it, I think I would do that if I have a father like Hank. What Connor said to Angel was a truth fact that it was a bit too late now to be acting like his father. I mean Angel wasn't there for him when he needed Angel. Anyway, I like the bonding part where both sat down and talk, not everything but at least they did talk. Dawn has been letting Connor sleep in her dorm, that's sweet of her, but she did like Connor right ya so I guess she would do that for him. So, con't the next chapter please and thank you.

Author's Response: I don't think BUffy was overly harsh. Hank has pretty consistently let her down. My big thing is that he didnt even come to Joyce's funeral, nor did he support Buffy and Dawn after Joyce died. Semi-bonding between Angel and Connor was nice. However, with both Angel and Hank, I'm going to try to make the point that it's never too late to start acting like an adult. Or a father. We'll see how that plays out. Thanks for the review.

always angel 11/14/05 - 11:56PM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
I have a dad like Hank and I know that if he suddenly showed up wanting forgiveness I wouldn't grant it so easily. What I'm trying to get at is its good that you had Buffy be angry at Hank, if she forgave him just like that it wouldn't be realistic.

Author's Response: I think there's a nice contrast between Dawn, who wants Hank back in her life, and Buffy, who's had enough of Hank. I hope to have a little more drama next seaosn. Profvided, of course, that there is one.

axel 11/14/05 - 11:53AM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
"Slayers are girls, do I look like a girl to you?" "Kinda yeah." poor Connor, at least Dawn knows he's a guy. And where's Hank been? I always said, if a man doesn't take care of his family, he ain't a man, so he better have a good explaintion. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked the girly jokes. Making fun of poor Connor is just too easy sometimes. Hank doesn't have a good explanation for past deeds, but he does have promises about the future. We'll see how they turn out.

Vamp19762000 11/14/05 - 02:16AM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
I totally get why Buffy's mad. It's justified. I had a dad like that. That's just something you don't just get over, maybe never and it can make you have a lot of trust issues. If she just gets over it right away, it's not really realistic. On another not, now that Emily's gone I'm still waiting for Connor to get his head out of his ass and notice Dawn.

Author's Response: Connor noticed Dawn in the first chapter at Full Moon on the Quad. (That's a real Stanford tradition, by the way). And dating your dead girlfriend's roommate . . . that's gotta be tricky. Angry Buffy will be aorund for a little while but, as I've said before, it's not her story. Hope you enjoy. Only one more chapter to go for "season one." As for season two, not sure what I'm goingt o do. I'm not wild about the obligation of writing 22 more chapters. Then again, I left a lot of loose ends in this "season." Thanks again for reading and for revieiwing. Both are greatly appreciated.

BelovedSlayer 11/14/05 - 01:11AM 24: 21. Compartmentalize Signed
I have to say Buffy pretty much annoyed me in this chappie because she was acting like a selfish bitch to her father although i know exactly how she feels about him. I think that part for me was the most interesting and hopefully something either good or bad will happen between father and daughter pretty soon although i have to admit, Hank being there made things a bit awkward. great chappie and hopefully you'll update really soon.

Author's Response: I was hoping Buffy would come off as more sympathetic than she did for you. I mean, the guy didn't even come to her mother's funeral. Hank presence wil probablyl be awkward in the next chapter as well. Other than have him argue with Buffy and ingratiate himself with Dawn, I really don't have much to do with him. Thanks for the review. They are always appreciated :)
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