Reviews for Hell on Earth 2: Futures Divided
| Peaches Girl |
11/29/05 - 09:57PM |
11: Chapter 10: the mutiny of colony 17 |
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OMG!!! Where is Buffy and Angel. I hope they get there in time. Awesome chapter, try not to keep us in suspense too long.
Author's Response: okay I won't. Everybody know you shouldn't leave Angelus alone for too long bad things happen. Thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
11/20/05 - 10:13PM |
1: Prologue |
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I meant at the end of the story. They win, but old Giles (not knowing they won) send Becky back, and makes it worse.
Author's Response: Interesting. but there is going to be a few more hicuups until then lets not forget that Angel needs to distroy the star to end the current apocalypse. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/20/05 - 07:19PM |
10: Chapter 9: Welcome to ‘Hell A’ |
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Geat chapter. Watch Giles send Becky back in time, just after they win, and mess the time line up again.
Author's Response: Nice in theory, not so nice in practice considering they don't have Becky at the moment they have Rebecca. plus the mutiny is going to help matters either. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/20/05 - 09:59AM |
10: Chapter 9: Welcome to ‘Hell A’ |
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I have a feeling things are about to get very interesting. Update soon I wanna know what happens next.
Author's Response: indeed the trouble for colony 17 has only just begun. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/19/05 - 02:15AM |
9: Chapter 8: In the family way |
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Yes I know they need Becky, to help them, but she did kill Faith, so I vote they KILL THE B*%ch! Good Job.
Author's Response: Don't worry Alex i guarantee that Becky will get her comeupins. Thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/19/05 - 02:06AM |
9: Chapter 8: In the family way |
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I thought that in this timeline Dawn would know who Rebecca's father was.Guess I was wrong. Anyways, are we gonna see what Rebecca's been going through for the last week?
Author's Response: No. Wolfram and Heart made sure of that. actually it's kind of your fault that this chapter happened. While i was planing out the details of "the history of the future pts 1-4" in last slayer i never intended to say who Becky's father was simply because i didn't know. But since you all kept asking i had to think of one. one of the original ideas i had was Conner but i ditched it for the Wolfram and Heart idea because it made sense that the evil lawyers would stoop this low to try and win the war. as for Rebecca my plan for this fic was to set it half in L.A. and half in the hell dimension which i nicknamed "Hell A" so the rest of the story is going to be set here where they are fighting Angelus and Vampire Willow. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/18/05 - 11:11PM |
8: Chapter 7: Nighthawk Down |
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Great chapter, and I didn't see the truth about becky's father coming. I still can't belive you killed Faith, OK I'm over it now, NNNOOOOAAHHH!
Author's Response: Like i told you in my last response i didn't kill Faith Becky killed Faith i can't be held responsible for what i write my slayer to do. as for Becky's father you think the reveal was surprising wait till you hear the details. Thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/18/05 - 10:33PM |
8: Chapter 7: Nighthawk Down |
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I had this strange feeling that Angel was Becky's father, but it was still surprising to read it. Update soon, I can't wait to find out how this happened.
Author's Response: Trust me you won't be dissapointed. Thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
11/16/05 - 11:32PM |
7: Chapter 6: The Club Hellmouth massacre |
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DAMNIT! YOU KILLED FAITH! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME? WHY COULDN'T YOU'VE KILLED BUFFY? WHY MY FAITH? YOU EVIL EVIL MAN! NNNNOOOOAAAAHHH!
Author's Response: 1) I didn't kill Faith. Becky killed Faith.
2) Buffy was no where near the club. and also didn't know about Becky's arrival
3) Wood and Faith run this branch of the slayer orporation. it seems most likely they would arrive first
4) i had to make Becky look as evil as possible. to do that she had to kill the nearest lead.
5) hey! stop yelling i can hear you fine. |
| always angel |
11/16/05 - 11:18PM |
7: Chapter 6: The Club Hellmouth massacre |
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Wow... this chapter was just ...wow!
Author's Response: I have to confess. one of the reasons I created Club Hellmouth was for this fight scene. plus this is the only fight scene to date where I had to work out the order of weapons because of the amount of detail i know i was going to pump into it. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/16/05 - 09:44PM |
6: Chapter 5: The mystery of Rebecca Summers |
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Oh man, this really can't be good.
Author's Response: Just read the next chapter and see. thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
11/16/05 - 01:07PM |
6: Chapter 5: The mystery of Rebecca Summers |
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Oh F#*k, Becky's going to kill them all. I hope the hid that scythe better this time, or better yet destroyed it, cus I think there going to need all they have. By the way Loved the "someone need to learn to read line. Keep it up.
Author's Response: I actually toyed with the idea of the scythe being stored in L.A. but that wouldn't have made sense it would be in the council in England. as for Becky when i was planing this fic i though about what would be different about this Becky and it became clear to me. in last slayer by the end of the story you had for this girl in futures divided you don't. an extra six years in the apocalypse would make her willing to kill without remorse. thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: in last slayer by the end of the story you had to care for this girl in futures divided you don't |
| always angel |
11/15/05 - 11:48PM |
5: Chapter 4: Extracting the Package |
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Damn, just when yo think things couldn't get worse Wolfram and Hart busts in and messes everything up.
Author's Response: Well if you can't trust an evil law firm who can you trust. i think people should be more worried about why they want the uber-slayer then anything else. Thank for reviewing |
| axel |
11/15/05 - 11:06PM |
5: Chapter 4: Extracting the Package |
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Super Psyco Becky hu, Yep, happy days, are gone. Good job.
Author's Response: and this is only the tip of the proverbial iceberg. by now you would have noticed the key difference between Rebecca Summers and Becky Summers. Thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/15/05 - 12:31AM |
4: Chapter 3: The Crossing |
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Buffy is so gonna kick Angel's ass. I can't wait to see her reaction to the situation, but it looks like a lot more people are gonna find out about it.
Author's Response: I always felt that Buffy had incredible timing and if you want to make a bad situation worse just have someone show up unexpectedly. thanks for reviewing. |
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