Reviews for In The Forests Of The Night
| filmtheory |
11/14/05 - 01:37AM |
11: Fallen Into Darkness |
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I really love the characters you’ve created. That’s one of the reasons this chapter made me kind of sad. (That’s as spoilery as I’ll get). Again, the descriptions in the chapter bordered on poetry. (“the soft breeze along with the lifeless trees that seem to radiate life once more”). That, combined with the constantly mounting tension and the consistently developing plot, has me completely addicted and panting for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much filmtheory. i wanted to add some sadness to somehow make this fic a bit dark and bleak in terms of the descriptive eerie scenes i added in and to make it seem like a reader is actually reading poetry instead of just reading a story by itself. lucky though i have completed the next chappie and i will post it by tomorrow since its so late right now. i wanted to bring in some sadness to make the readers feel sad as well so its really great to see im doing great with that as well. i thank you filmtheory for expressig those kind words which puts a smile on my face. i will update by tomorrow. Thanx!! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/12/05 - 08:38AM |
11: Fallen Into Darkness |
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So sad! (sniffles) Damon gave his life for Angel - that was so touching and of course so sad, but you really wrote it so perfectly - really conveying the emotion of the chapter wonderfully. Also, I have to say I really liked the lines from the Evanescence song in there - very well placed and it worked so well with that scene. For me, I could hear Amy Lee singing, and she has such a powerful voice that it really brought that scene to life even more. Again, so sad, but you really, really do know how to breath such life into a story - again, I feel like I'm there, seeing everything, feeling everything - feeling Angel's torment, Buffy's torment ... this is so beautiful and so very wonderful. This truly is such a joy to read, and I'm looking forward to more. Don't end it anytime soon! I can't wait to see what else the Night Ones have in store, and how Buffy and Angel will deal with them. As for Buffy's mom, that was also very sad, and it should be intense when Buffy finds out what really happened. So heres hoping you can update soon!!
Author's Response: Angels Shadow thank you soo very much for the awesome kick ass comments. you're are truly amazing and i couldn't express how happy i am to be reading your awesome comments. I added those lyrics cuz i thought it would be so perfect to add to the sadness that the group was feeling when they lost Damon and im glad to see that it worked so perfectly well together. Words cannot express my gratitude for your kind words but they bring up a big smile on my face thank you soooooo much Angels Shadow. I will return the favor in your Phantom fic. i really super hope you'll update that fic really soon cuz i wanna so want to know what happens. As for Buffy's mother, Buffy herself will find out the horrfying truth behind her mother's murder by almost by the end of the fic and don't worry, im not ending this fic anytime soon. it will be a *long* fic. I promise i will update asap i already gotten some of the next chappie written. |
| always angel |
11/12/05 - 12:25AM |
11: Fallen Into Darkness |
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The tiger killed Buffy's mother! This chapter was so sad, I could feel Angel's sorrow as I read. Great update. Update soon!
Author's Response: lol i wish the tiger *did* kill Buffy's mother but it didn't he he. Buffy will learn almost by the end of the fic the terrifying, secret truth about her mother's murder that she never had found out. since the chappie i just posted earlier, Buffy has no clue as to what *really* happened during her mother's murder. im not gonna spoil anything, but at the end of the fic, there's gonna be a huge surprise in store for her. but that's all i gotta say he he. as for the sadness of the chappie, i wanted to add that in since the fic is almost dark when describe in detail and i wanted to add those sad feelings to it so im glad i did just that. Thank you very much Always Angel for the support you one of the best and i promise i will update ASAP!! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/11/05 - 06:20PM |
11: Fallen Into Darkness |
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Yet another fabulos chapter. You can really play with a persons emotions if you use the right words.
Author's Response: Thank you so much DarkAvenger even if you don't do happy, i would surely give you a hug j/k lol!! playing with people's emotions is the name of the game here he he!! Thank u DarkAvenger i hope you're enjoying the fic so far. happy reading!! |
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