Reviews for The Destroyer
| Quortoth |
12/16/05 - 05:48PM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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I loved that one, “You don’t think I can run metaphorically?” Connor said angrily--- I thought that was great, then Andrew calling Conner, Tango. "Tango's Family" Funny, I love it. Tango, Tango, Tango :-) :-P!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked that linea. I'm awlays afraid my jokes won't work, so I'm glad they got a couple laughs. Thanks for the review. |
| spideygirl |
11/16/05 - 09:14AM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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Yo, I finally read Chapter 5..*sigh* These few days I have been having internet connection problem, so that's why now then I finally finish reading. Anyway, I was shocked the part Connor cut his left wrist for Angel to drink his blood because Angel hasn't eaten for days but weird thing why did he punched Connor before he eat his meal. Good for Eve, her ears got chopped off finally but damned she's getting a new ear. As usual, Connor hates magic and Buffy must be disgusted. So Angel finally told the scooby gang about the memory spell and the best part Andrew comes in hugging Angel. Then Giles was like Andrew, we are angry at Angel so please stop hugging him. It was so hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing that part. So Andrew has been keeping with him all the while so what happen next..next chapter please and thank you.
Author's Response: "He punched Connor" was a typo. It was supposed to be that Connor punched Angel to get him vampy and wanting to eat. I thought the Andrew bit could be funny. Buffy will be possed at Angel for a while, but not for the memory spell. I hope to have the next chapte rup soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/11/05 - 12:51AM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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Willow telling Angel that memory spells are bad was great! Like she hasn't done a few in her day. This story is great. Update soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the WIllow/ memory spell irony. Hope you keep reading. Thanks so much for the review. |
| axel |
11/10/05 - 06:23PM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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"I can run metaphoricaly! I don't no what that means, but I can do it!" HA! Funny. Did I read Willow tell Angel memory spells where bad (like say, making your girlfriend forget a fight?) Great chapter. Maybe next chapter Connor can kill Andrew (did I just say that?)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad the irony of Willow complaining about memory spells wasn't lost on anyone. I thought it was a nice touch. As for Connor killing Andrew . . . hmmm. I need to go write. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/10/05 - 05:44PM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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Again, I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. You've written the characters so well, and Andrew's appearance there at the end was amusing. Everyone is reacting to the situation true to form and I feel like I might be reading a script right off of Buffy or Angel because you've done a phenomenal job at the characterizations. I really do love this story, and I hope there will be an update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope to u[date again soon as well. I also hope you keep reading and enjoying the story. I have a lot ot get through next chapter, so I'm not sure how long it will take to write it or how long the chapter willbe. Hopefully, it won't be too, too long. Thanks again. |
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