Reviews for An obsession for the eye.
| Siannaxz |
08/02/06 - 06:21AM |
1: An obsession for the eye. |
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Oh my god!!! This story is great!!!
Author's Response: thanks :D |
| BelovedSlayer |
06/18/06 - 12:47AM |
3: Going mad. |
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this is a good fic. the only thing wrong with it is that the chapters should be more lengthy cause i kinda don't like super short chapters but other than that i enjoyed reading the first three chapters. the only thing is Buffy should have some sense knocked into her. i know she's now one of the undead but is the scooby gang gonna find out she's alive? update soon and be careful with the spelling errors and such
Author's Response: hi, thanks, and I'll try to make the next chapter longer, and the scooby gang do know she is a vampire, if you read the second chapter, Giles I think say something like i don't want Joyce to see her, not yet, then he's talking about how he doesn't want Joyce to see vampire Buffy, I know, it's cryptic, and i'll try to watch those spelling errors, I'd go a whole lot better if I had a betta reader or whatever you call it, do you know where I could find one ? |
| axel |
01/18/06 - 10:44PM |
2: A gift from the gods. |
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| Poor Joyce. She's been though so much Good job. By the way, I don't know, if you got my email, But I never heard back from the other writer. So If you still want to write the next chapter of Unfinnished Business, It's OK. |
| kizzy |
12/27/05 - 02:47PM |
2: A gift from the gods. |
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Oooohhh this is good and quite eerie. Its creepy Angelus and hes so cool when hes creepy (and sexy) really loving this.
Author's Response: Thanks :-) that makes me very happy to hear :-)) |
| MissEdith |
12/17/05 - 03:59PM |
2: A gift from the gods. |
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well this is creepifying.
Author's Response: Thx :) |
| Monkey Pants |
12/01/05 - 06:31AM |
1: An obsession for the eye. |
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Wow. That sent a shiver up my spine. Angelus was truly scary here, even injecting a bit of an Anne Rice into it. I would like to see a followup of this too.
Author's Response: Waw, that's an honor, I have never read one of her stories, I want to though, but I've heard of her and she's a great writer, I think, so that's truly an honor for me that you compare me to her. And I will continue, it will just take a while, I wanna do this good! Thx! |
| frenchtoast101 |
11/06/05 - 11:08AM |
1: An obsession for the eye. |
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Wow, I love this. It's really well-written and I just love the title. You did a really, really great job with this.
Author's Response: Well, thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. And yeah, I thought that the title would be cool.
Thx again! |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/05/05 - 09:09PM |
1: An obsession for the eye. |
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i really love this alot!! you did such a awesome job on this and i love reading the part with Angelus in it cuz he's such a hot bad ass and all lol!! i hope you can make a sequel to this awesome short fic. i love it!! great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!! And as I said before, maybe I'll make one after some of my other stories are finished, in a few months, and again, thank you! |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
11/05/05 - 11:54AM |
1: An obsession for the eye. |
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good story. there's a lot of potential there if you wanted to add on or make a sequal or something.
Author's Response: Thx ! I may make a sequel after I finished some of my other stories, thx again! |
| Timan |
11/05/05 - 04:09AM |
1: An obsession for the eye. |
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Wow. creepy by awesome. good job
Author's Response: Thx, I aim to please! |
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