Reviews for Lost
| lieselot |
08/07/06 - 11:39AM |
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You know, I think I'm going to read the rest of it, this is a good first chapter, i might like it, i'll let you know.
Author's Response: thanks...I'm happy you're going to give my fic a shot, hope it keeps your intrest |
| Sinister |
01/13/06 - 07:01PM |
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| Great first chapter. I've read Angels Shadow's version of a Buffy/Lost crossover and its really good so far. She said she got the idea from your story so I thought I'd read it too. To be honist when I first read Angels Shadow's version I had never watched Lost but I've heard so many good things about so I got the first season on DVD the other day. Anyway enough of my rambling lol. This is a great start and I can't wait to read more. This should be good! |
| MissEdith |
01/12/06 - 08:18PM |
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Ok, I'm about to go read the next chapter, but I have one quick note: Buffy should think "has been boring," not "had been boring".
Author's Response: Stupid typos. lol thanks for bringing it to my attention and its nice to see a new reader to the story. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/23/05 - 10:51PM |
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Awesome. the chappie is totally awesome like i said earlier. hope you can update really soon. this is for axel. as for smacking Jack upside the head because of the vampire thing, i only said that cuz i think it would be fun if someone smacked him lol *smiled* but i would really love to see him actually see a vampire as proof that they do exist. I think reading this fic is getting me a little overexcited which is prolly why i said i would like to see him get smacked in the first place. sorry bout that Axel lol. But anyways, littlewiccan, please please update asap!!! You're doing an awesome job on this!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're getting into the fic. You and axel's discussion about Jack really made me smile. lol But honestly its really not in Jack's character to beleive in vampires. Well, at least not without any proof. Thanks for the review. It made my day. Oh and p.s I updated On the Road, just thought you'd like to know. |
| axel |
11/23/05 - 09:14PM |
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| Ok sorry for the double review, this is actulay for BelovededSlayer. Why do you want to hit Jack for not believing in vampires? He's a reasonable man, that's why he doesn't believe. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/23/05 - 07:39PM |
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| You're doing such a awesome job on this littlewiccan!! keep it up!!! someone needs to smack Jack in the face though. he doesn't believe in vampires...i can't believe it. You have to make some vampire or demon attack him or something so he can believe Buffy cuz that's what she does! i'd like to bitchslap him lol!! Anyways, great, awesome chappie. really enjoyed it so please update asap!!! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/09/05 - 06:07AM |
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| I have to agree with axel. If you can at some point, I think you should include that about Sayid ... well, unless it doesn't fit into your version of the island and the survivors, which is fine, and I'll love it no matter what. I guess it depends how much of their pasts you're going to reveal, but Sayid's military training I think plays into his character and motivation a lot if you're planning on making him a more central character. Again, love the story. Update soon. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/08/05 - 04:41PM |
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this fic just keeps getting better and better and i can't wait to see what happens next. so far you're doing an awesome job on this. update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks You!! |
| Timan |
11/05/05 - 11:33PM |
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love the start. you have me hooked. can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks more to come soon! |
| axel |
11/04/05 - 11:48PM |
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I like the idea, and Yes I want to see Sawyer, every show need a good jerk, (plus he's from my home state, that helps) Keep it up.
Author's Response: Don't worry I'm going to try to fit him in to the story. Thanks for your review. |
| filmtheory |
11/04/05 - 09:13PM |
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Just a suggestion- if you wanted to stick with the cannon, this would take place between seasons 1 and 2. She’d have met the central scoobie gang, but not Kendra or Faith. Plus, I think Buffy spent that summer with her dad. As for the story itself, what can I say? Well, I suppose I should probably say I’ll have to see more before I can be sure this will be awesome, but it’s off to a very, very promising start. Although it was short, the story had both drama and action. The story set up a great dramatic theme that was definitely present on the show; Buffy’s relationship with her more or less estranged father. The plane falling apart was also written in an exhilarating way. Also, short chapters can be easier to handle for some readers so, as long as the story flows, I wouldn’t worry about chapter length. Great start. Keep writing. I don’t watch “Lost,” but I’m familiar with the premise and think Buffy would fit into it perfectly. Post again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks. That's when I thought it would fit it. The only reson I made this chapter short was becasue I wanted the plane crash to be one chapter in itself. Thanks for your review and the e-mail. I made the corrections you suggested. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/04/05 - 07:24PM |
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wow. i gotta say the first chappie sounds really super interesting so far but i gotta admit, i don't watch the Lost show like everyone does but i gotta say i really really enjoyed the chappie lots. i decided to read this fic and give it a try and so far i really love how this is going. the part that im really excited about is when Buffy and the gang has to get into survival mode when they get trapped in an island. now *that* sounds really cool!! i can't wait to read that part. so far you're doing awesome on this!! im gonna add this to my faves and please update ASAP!!
Author's Response: Thank You!! and don't worry you don't have to watch the show to get this fic anything you need to know I'll explain, so It will be very freindly to ppl who don't watch as wel as ppl who do.
Author's Response: P.S. I updated On the Road. Just thought you might want to know. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/04/05 - 07:10PM |
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I'm sorry, but I have to review again after reading your response. YES!!! The characters from Lost ... OMG, you have to have Sawyer in there. K, sorry about that, but he's one of my faves. And hey, I'd never expect the plot to be the same. How could you - us viewers don't even know what the hell is going on - lol. Anyway, sorry for the second review on the same chapter, but again, I totally love this idea, and here's hoping you get the many other reviews you should get for this!!
Author's Response: Thanks and don't apoligize the more reviews the better and I think I'm going to try to put all the characters in or at least the major ones. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/04/05 - 06:59PM |
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Awesome - fabulous - fantastic - any other adjective you can think of just insert here!! This is great!! I LOVE Lost - its the best show out there right now, in my humble opinion. Please, please, please update this soon. I can't wait to see where you take this!!
Author's Response: Thank You!!! *does a victory dance* lol I like the show alot too and althought it won't have the exact plot from the show or anything, it will have the charcters. Thanks for your review and I'll try to update soon. |
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