Reviews for Nocturnal Survivor: BtVS
| MonsieurRipper |
08/07/06 - 01:04AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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If I might suggest... I think the chapters could be shorter. Right now they are usually around 9000 words. That's a lot to read in one go on a computer screen. It makes my eyes hurt haha.
Making more and smaller chapters would be good!
Just a thought.
Author's Response: I agree. I ramble too much. I'll definitely start splitting up the chapters, or maybe just putting in less detail. Thanks for the suggestion! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/21/05 - 07:11PM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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POODLE THE BEETLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was laughing soooooooo hard at that and my dad was looking at me like i had gone off my nut. Im sorry to see Dru go, shes so funny! but hey, Anya is still there. The whole Ripper/Giles thingy, woah...deep and complicated stuff. Update soon
Author's Response: It is very complicated. I'm afraid I'm digging myself a nice pit of confusion with very slippery walls that anyone who will read this fic might get trapped in and will never come out, but they'll be able to shout loudly enough to alert anyone else not to read it because of the pit, oh god the pit.
Haha, I'm very melodramatic. I'm glad you're laughing. That was my intention, but my writing always has a habit of... well, I just explained the pit of confusion analogy. Things don't go as planned, anyway. Thanks for reviewing! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/06/05 - 03:53PM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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OOOH...I just had a thoght(which is something new altogther)Is the host guy an evil demon sorcerer? Are Evil time-warping blankets takeing over the world? Is Oz gonna be an evil caveman/were-wolf dude?ANSWER ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: WHAHAHAHA! NEVAR! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/05/05 - 07:58AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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I love this! You wrote Dru perfectly, Anya too. I watched a whole 3 episodes of survivor, but i still like this better. HILRIUS(yeah, thats spelled wrong)
Author's Response: Oh, good! I find that characters with strong traits (eg. Drusilla) are easier to write for because I know how they speak, but with characters like Riley and Kennedy, I find them so generic that it's difficult to decipher them from one another. Thank you so much! |
| Timan |
11/05/05 - 01:59AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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"everybody wins, except for the loosers they go home" i love that line. this is going to be seriously funny. can't wait to see what happens. good job
Author's Response: Thank you! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/01/05 - 05:57AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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How funny! I admit to watching one season of Survivor (for shame) just to see what all the hype was about. SO overrated. I'm really enjoying this so far - I find it very amusing - hope you update!
Author's Response: Haha, I watched a couple of seasons too, but I now find the whole thing rather worthy of ridicule. Thank you for commenting! |
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