Reviews for Nocturnal Survivor: BtVS
| MonsieurRipper |
08/07/06 - 01:04AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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If I might suggest... I think the chapters could be shorter. Right now they are usually around 9000 words. That's a lot to read in one go on a computer screen. It makes my eyes hurt haha.
Making more and smaller chapters would be good!
Just a thought.
Author's Response: I agree. I ramble too much. I'll definitely start splitting up the chapters, or maybe just putting in less detail. Thanks for the suggestion! |
| MonsieurRipper |
07/22/06 - 11:19PM |
2: Episode I - Part I |
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Oh my god this is great! I adore the enchanted blanket, and the idea of everyone being ripped from certain times is fabulous. This is hilarious and I wish I had time to read the rest tonight!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
07/22/06 - 11:13PM |
5: Episode II--Part I |
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I'm glad you brought this back, I really like it. Xander better not go back to the light and get himself killed and I really hope that Wes is ok. As for the way the chapter ended....they're all screwed.
Author's Response: Haha, they are, aren't they? Damn. Oh well, they'll probably get on it before Eyghon kills too many people. Thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/22/05 - 03:38AM |
4: Episode I - Part III |
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Hilarious! What did Angel sense about the Island and what the heck is up with Giles? Please please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, but I don't think this will be updated soon. I'm tackling things three at a time; unfortunately, this is the fourth. Once I complete one of my other ongoing fics, this'll get updated. I love it, I really do, but I don't have the energy for it right now. So much work! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/21/05 - 07:11PM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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POODLE THE BEETLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was laughing soooooooo hard at that and my dad was looking at me like i had gone off my nut. Im sorry to see Dru go, shes so funny! but hey, Anya is still there. The whole Ripper/Giles thingy, woah...deep and complicated stuff. Update soon
Author's Response: It is very complicated. I'm afraid I'm digging myself a nice pit of confusion with very slippery walls that anyone who will read this fic might get trapped in and will never come out, but they'll be able to shout loudly enough to alert anyone else not to read it because of the pit, oh god the pit.
Haha, I'm very melodramatic. I'm glad you're laughing. That was my intention, but my writing always has a habit of... well, I just explained the pit of confusion analogy. Things don't go as planned, anyway. Thanks for reviewing! |
| frenchtoast101 |
11/08/05 - 08:16PM |
3: Episode I - Part II |
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omg her nose was attached to her chin! omg! thats hilarious!! and yet...poor willow. *whines* aww, whys she going to the cabin with tara, why not oz? im a die hard willow/oz fan, but nonetheless, this fic is amazing and the whole challenge idea was so original. great, great job!
Author's Response: We'll see what happens. I haven't decided yet, and I'm taking a break from writing at the moment. I never know what happens, but I imagine that Oz didn't go because he wolfs out too easily at night. Thank you for your comments! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/08/05 - 06:27PM |
3: Episode I - Part II |
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Hehehe - this is hilarious - this is fantastic - this is just plain great!! Loved the update. I have to agree, Anya lecturing the fruit was great - just so Anya. I'm laughing my butt off here reading this. Really, this is so clever, and so well written. Still loving the whole concept of everyone being from a different time - can't wait to see what goes down with that. Please update soon if you can!!
Author's Response: I love that concept, so I sort of emphasized it. Thank you again and million times over for your comments; I always look forward to them. :) |
| DarkAvenger |
11/08/05 - 06:25AM |
3: Episode I - Part II |
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Anya lecturing fruit about manners? Priceless! Another great chapter. Update more often of feel my wrath.
Author's Response: Ha, thank you. |
| always angel |
11/08/05 - 01:53AM |
3: Episode I - Part II |
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This is absolutely hilarious! With the blanket that doesn't like vampires and Willow being bitten by a live pear. Lol. I love it ! Update soon.
Author's Response: I'm actually taking a break right now, so I won't update anything for a while, but thank you ever so much for your encouragement! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/06/05 - 03:53PM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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OOOH...I just had a thoght(which is something new altogther)Is the host guy an evil demon sorcerer? Are Evil time-warping blankets takeing over the world? Is Oz gonna be an evil caveman/were-wolf dude?ANSWER ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: WHAHAHAHA! NEVAR! |
| frenchtoast101 |
11/05/05 - 08:21PM |
2: Episode I - Part I |
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Oh...My....Gosh. This cracks me up, it really does. Other than being hilarious, this story is very, *very* well written and the characters are absolutely perfect. Like Anya saying: "Why can't we name the tribe something happy like 'The Money Tribe' or perhaps 'The Bunny-Free Tribe'?" That was soo funny. And so very Anya. And you have Dru's crazy dialouge perfectly as well. Wow, I can't stop gushing about you're perfect characterization...If I sound jealous, I am. ;-) Oh, and what's up with Oz? Oh, I hope he's okay...He's my favorite character. =D And the whole 'everyone's from a different time period' thing is genius. Like everything in this story. And the whole Giles/Erygon (can't remember his name) thing was a very original idea, so props to you for that...And the enchanted blanket thing. That was a knee-slapper. Well, I CAN'T wait till the next chapter! The challenges should be very interesting...And the tribal council...and everything....UPDATE SOON PLEEEASE! I'm soo adding this to my favorites list. Done babbling now. =D
Author's Response: Oh... wow. Thank you! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/05/05 - 07:58AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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I love this! You wrote Dru perfectly, Anya too. I watched a whole 3 episodes of survivor, but i still like this better. HILRIUS(yeah, thats spelled wrong)
Author's Response: Oh, good! I find that characters with strong traits (eg. Drusilla) are easier to write for because I know how they speak, but with characters like Riley and Kennedy, I find them so generic that it's difficult to decipher them from one another. Thank you so much! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/05/05 - 07:53AM |
2: Episode I - Part I |
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Hehehe - this is so funny! Between this and the Xander Gander, I really gotta say you know how to write comedy. This is fantastic! And the whole everyone being pulled from a different time to be on the island is an interesting twist. So is good ole Jeff going to turn out to be a master demon from hell or something?? Hey, anyway, love the update. This is really so amusing (Spike especially is cracking me up), so I hope you can update soon!
Author's Response: Such lovely words! Thank you ever so much... I do love writing comedy, but I'm always worried if I'm actually being funny or just silly. I'm glad my humour is recognizable! |
| Timan |
11/05/05 - 01:59AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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"everybody wins, except for the loosers they go home" i love that line. this is going to be seriously funny. can't wait to see what happens. good job
Author's Response: Thank you! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/01/05 - 05:57AM |
1: Introduction by Jeff Probst |
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How funny! I admit to watching one season of Survivor (for shame) just to see what all the hype was about. SO overrated. I'm really enjoying this so far - I find it very amusing - hope you update!
Author's Response: Haha, I watched a couple of seasons too, but I now find the whole thing rather worthy of ridicule. Thank you for commenting! |
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