Reviews for On the Road
| Timan |
11/06/05 - 06:48PM |
4: Five Easy Pieces |
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| i love the idea of Xander and Angel working together. this is pretty much the dictionary definition of 'odd couple'. this chapter was really well done we were entertained and you managed to slip a product placement in as well. I bet Nestles were really happy. good job |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/04/05 - 09:34PM |
4: Five Easy Pieces |
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hey thanks for telling me that you updated on this i really appreciate it!! anyways, the lastest chappie is a bit grotesque bcuz of the body parts but that's ok cuz its good to see now that Angel and Xander have to work together to find a demon since they uh usually don't get along very much. And i hate to say that you did an excellent job on writing Xander since he is kinda tough to write about bcuz of his quirkiness and all lol. Anyways, i really love how this story is developing and i can't wait til see what happens next!! You are doing such a fantastic job on this awesome fic. im so happy that i caught it earlier on when the first chappie was posted. when you post the next chappie i will definitely read it for sure. please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I always wonder when I'm writing a charcter if it sounds like them. I'm glad Xander's voice is coming out right. I'll update as soon as I can. |
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