Reviews for Coming Together
| Javian |
11/28/05 - 05:58PM |
17: Progress Report |
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Wow, how did the bad guys find out all of that? It's a nice summary of all of them though, update soon!
Author's Response: They have extreamly good resourses which makes them an even bigger threat don't you think? Thanks for the review and I'm happy to know your liking the story. It puts a smile on my face. =) |
| Angels Shadow |
11/28/05 - 04:51PM |
17: Progress Report |
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As always, fantastic update. I actually really liked that you summed everything up there and showed how much these guys know. The summary about each group was nice because it was a good refresher course. Plus, this shows that the big bads obviously have connections and can obviously figure things out - which makes them an even bigger threat. As always, I really, really love this story and I'll be looking out for more updates ... soon hopefully :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad this chapter wasn't too boring. Thank you as always for your constant support. It means a lot. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/28/05 - 01:29PM |
1: Back-story |
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Wow!! I just started reading the entire fic for the first time just right now and the plot, the characters, and everything totally blew my mind away!! it must be kinds tough because you have to write in so many of the Buffy characters and i have to give you props for that. I mean wow. i can't even express it in words how much i love the plot and the summary. its just ao freaking and amazingly awesome!! i really enjoyed that all four of the families moved to Sunnydale because of the hellmouth threat but they don't even know that they're going after the same thing. i have to admit, the summary and the plot you just done is unusual because i havent' read anything like this so far and i'm totally loving your fic. its incredible and amazing and i have to say... i hate that guy Damian. he's a little too arrogant and cocky and to me, if someone is that arrogant, they usually get their ass kicked at the end of the fic lol!! But either way, what i can i say?? i totally totally enjoyed your fic Sinister and i will definitely add this to my faves. you're writing the characters sooo well and i cannot wait to see what happens next. you must please please update asap!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It means so much to me to know that I'm doing a good job with characters. It is a little difficult trying to keep of the 20 characters from Buffy and Angel and also adding in these new mistery men that you will be finding out more about in later chapters. Thanks so much for your praise It means a lot to me knowing that I'm doing a good job. Again I can't express my thanks enough. I hope you keep reading and enjoying. |
| Peaches Girl |
11/28/05 - 08:21AM |
16: The First Day of College - Part 4 |
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I think you are doing a fantastic job. I love how you are building friendships and possible love interest. Cant wait to see more. Also, I wanted to say sorry for your loss. Hope all is well. I await your updates.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. It was hard at first but things are starting to get better. Back to the story. I'm glad your liking the friendship and love interest build ups. I was afraid for a little while there that people were starting to get bored from the lack of action but it's good to know that the boring stuff is interesting as well. Thanks again for all your support. It means a lot |
| always angel |
11/28/05 - 02:10AM |
16: The First Day of College - Part 4 |
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Great update! I'm excited to see what happens when Angel and Spike finally meet. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I was going to have Angel and Spike meet at school but that would just be too easy because as soon as they would shake hands they would see the rings on each other's fingers. I didn't want anyone to fully find anything out yet. So far everyone just has a "feeling" about the others that they just can't place. Anyway thanks again for the review. It means a lot. |
| always angel |
11/28/05 - 12:49AM |
12: The First Day of College - Part 2 |
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| This has nothing to do with your story..but I had to say that my half-sisters grandma passed away the same time your aunt did,of cancer,a nd we live in florida. Isnt it weird how stuff like that happens? |
| always angel |
11/28/05 - 12:39AM |
12: The First Day of College - Part 2 |
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This has nothing to do with your story..but I had to say that my half-sisters grandma passed away the same time your aunt did,of cancer,a nd we live in florida. Isnt it weird how stuff like that happens?
Author's Response: Wow...that is weird. Of the same thing and in the same state and everything...very strange. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/27/05 - 09:04PM |
16: The First Day of College - Part 4 |
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Again, wonderful update! I'm so excited for this story. I absolutely love Xander and Anya - they're so cute!! I also like the thing you did with Angel and Spike - should be interesting to see how that plays out. Again, love it!! Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks again as always for reviewing. It really means a lot to me. I've always loved Xander and Anya together too...they're just so cute together lol. I was going to have Angel and Spike actually meet each other in this chapter but I decided to build up the suspence a little more. I have bigger plans for their first meeting. Anyway thanks again for reviewing. Your words always make me smile =) |
| Angels Shadow |
11/26/05 - 10:33AM |
15: The First Day of High School - Part 4 |
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Again, I love it - I love how you're slowly raising everyone's suspicions, and I like how Buffy asked Giles about Angel :) Again, for a story with so many characters, you're managing extremely well. You're balancing the time spent on each character, and I'm really, really enjoying this. I hope you'll update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much as always. It's so nice to know that I'm doing a good job making sure each character gets enough time in the spot light. Thats one of the things I was worried about. Of course there are sertain characters that I favor over others and I was trying not to put too much attention on those and not enough on the others. It's good to know that its working because in my story its not really Buffy thats the main character...they all are. Which of course makes it difficalt but also very fun. Anway thanks again so much for reviewing. I thrive on reviews. Thanks! |
| spikes girl |
11/25/05 - 09:19PM |
15: The First Day of High School - Part 4 |
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yeah great update, but man is the first day long! i'm not complaining though,, cause that indicates tha this fic will be very long! yay. i think so far my fav group would have to be the uni group. awesome stuff as usual
Author's Response: Thank you I'm so glad your enjoying it. I know the first day is very long but I did that just to make sure the characters get to meet each other and everything. As soon as I post The First Day of College - Part 4 the first days will be all done and things will start to get a lot more interesting...I hope. Thanks again for reviewing it means a lot to me. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/25/05 - 09:08PM |
14: The First Day of College - Part 3 |
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Hey, again I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. And aww, how cute - Xander and Anya meet :) And I know I say this everytime, but you're really doing such a great job with the pacing - introducing everything and getting everyone to meet each other. Each chapter is slowly building up the suspense to when they'll discover why they're all here. So again, great job. I see you've another chapter posted, but unfortunately my husband is telling me its time to get off the computer and watch some movies or something. I'll definitely be reading and reviewing that chapter soon, and I'm looking forward to it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much as usual for the reviews. I'm very glad your enjoying the story. You always put a big smile on my face everytime I read your reviews. Thanks again as always. |
| terry |
11/25/05 - 02:49PM |
1: Back-story |
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Cool idea for a story. I like the groups you developed and can't wait to see who hooks u with who. Should be hot.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad your liking it. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/19/05 - 06:14PM |
13: The First Day of High School - Part 3 |
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Again, I really love this story - I was so happy to see you updated. And, as usual, wonderful update! The build up is progressing nicely - logical and well paced. I really enjoy just seeing them go about their normal routine even as they realize it can't be natural that there are so many new students in one school. I also really liked the part with Jenny and Giles - I loved the two of them in the show, and I think I actually remember getting all teary eyed when she was killed. Again, fantastic story so far, and I'm so anxious for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad your enjoying it. I would have updated sooner but I couldn't get to a computer in Flordia and there were other things going on anyway. I'm a little worried that people havn't realized I added two chapters though. I think most people are just reading First Day of High School - Part 3 and skipping right over First Day of College - Part 2 because I added them both at the same time. I guess I should add a note to the other chapter. As always thank you again for your support. I'm really glad your enjoying it. |
| Javian |
11/12/05 - 09:48AM |
11: The First Day of High School - Part 2 |
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I love the set up of this story and you're doing a great job with the characters. Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Hello there. Your a new face. Thank you so much. I'm really glad your enjoying it. It's really fun writing for these characters especially with the relationships I've given them. I try to stay true to the original characters but at the same time make them slightly different since they are in slightly different situations with the different relationships and all. It's good to know that I'm doing a good job. I hope to update soon. Thanks again for the review. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/12/05 - 08:49AM |
11: The First Day of High School - Part 2 |
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Hey, don't you even dare apologize for these chapters! This is fantastic. I really don't think they're jumpy at all. As I said before, with so many characters, you're handling it all so well! I think its really fun just to watch them all go about their daily routines in a new school - making new friends and getting adjusted. Again, I love that you're taking your time setting this all up. It wouldn't work if they just miraculously all figured out they were in Sunnydale for the same reason. That's going to take time, and I'm so happy you're taking the time to build up to it. It makes it really interesting, and it makes the plot move in a logical direction. You have a lot of characters to cover, and it'll take a little while before they all understand that they're in Sunnydale for the same reason. Again, you're doing a great job at developing this story and moving everything at a very logical pace. It really is a joy to read, so I hope you can update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks you so much. I was just worried that my readers might be getting kind of bored but its just like you said I wanted to take things slow and really have the characters get to know each other before anything really big starts to happen. As always thank you so much for your support and I hope to update soon. |
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