Reviews for Coming Together
| Angels Shadow |
12/08/05 - 06:03PM |
21: The Next Day |
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As always, fabulous update. Damien made me laugh - gee, I'm not really a bad guy, only trying to take over the world - lol. Anyway, I love how everyone seems to be clicking, and I suspect that will make things very interesting when they realize they're all here to stop the Hellmouth. Can't wait to see what Damian and his crew have in store for them. As always, love it!!
Author's Response: thanks I'm so glad you liked it. Like I said earlier to Belovedslayer I was afraid it might be a little dull since it pretty much just gives summaries and stuff but I'm glad to know that people liked it. Thanks again for reviewing. |
| BelovedSlayer |
12/08/05 - 12:56PM |
1: Back-story |
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You were right. this chappie was nothing but previews of what's happening and all that but i enjoyed it since all the groups are starting to come together. and i really hate that Damien guy. hope he'll get his ass kicked really soon he he. like i said, im enjoying how everyone's coming together and i can't wait for an update. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thanx I was a little worried that this chapter might be a little dull but I wanted to make sure that I really enfasised how everyone is coming together. I also wanted to build up the suspence with the badies. Thanks so much for reviewing. It means a lot! |
| Peaches Girl |
12/01/05 - 10:06PM |
20: The Bronze - Part 2 |
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Ok, I do love the pairs you set up. Its great to see how they are starting to all fit together. I think you need to establish this first and then go from there. Great job. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad your liking the pair ups. I've been kind of busy with homework and finals coming up that I prolly wont have time to update in the near future but I'll def give it a try. Thanks again for all your support! |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/30/05 - 09:58PM |
1: Back-story |
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i agree with always angel. Sinister, this is sooo not a boring chappie at all. in fact, i really enjoyed the great interaction between all of the gang meeting for the first or second time. its really really awesome and im sooo happy that Buffy and Angel met up again. I'm also sooo glad Willow and Oz met each other because to me they make such a cute couple and im glad Faith and Spike are having a good time. what will be more interesting to read is when all of the members work together to stop whoever the hell is the Big Bad or the Hellmouth or whatever. i cannot wait for that. and i gotta say you write the characters and your fic very very awesome as well. keep it up and please update asap!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. It really means a lot to me knowing that I'm doing a good job. I also can't wait to write when they fight to big badies and stop the hellmouth...or maybe not...who knows...they might fail and be sent to hell where they will face eternal damnation. Yea right lol. Anyway thats again I always apreasiate reviews more then you know. You keep reviewing and I'll keep writing. =) |
| always angel |
11/30/05 - 09:45PM |
20: The Bronze - Part 2 |
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This is not boring at all! So don't worry about the lack of action its fine. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when they all find out about each other.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you think its not boring. I wasn't really sure since there hasn't really been anything super exciting in a while but I promise there will be excitement coming up very soon. I can't wait till they find out about each other either. I've already kind of got it planned out on how I'm going to do it and I've very excited to write it. As always thanks so much for the reviews! |
| DarkAvenger |
11/30/05 - 08:28PM |
20: The Bronze - Part 2 |
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Major props for juggling like EVERY BtVS/Ats charactor EVER!! That takes skill, not at all dull, but lets get with the magic-y soon, k?
Author's Response: Thanks! It is a little hard sometimes to juggle all the characters but I just love them all so much I couldn't leave any out lol. And don't worry we will be getting to the magicy stuff very soon. Thanks again for the review. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/30/05 - 04:59PM |
20: The Bronze - Part 2 |
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This is not at all dull or boring, so don't dare worry about not having a lot of action. Stories can't always be about the action, suspense. You've got to take the time to build to it, which is what you're doing, and its great. I love watching these guys just have a good time because, well, yeah, we know its not going to stay good forever, so its nice to see them get the good times in before the villains really get involved. Plus, this was a great set up for everyone to get to know each other better. As always, wonderful story, and I can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I saw starting to get worried that the lack of action was boring people so thanks for reasuring me that it isn't. I loved writing these last two chapters because I had the chance to finally get pretty much all the characters together in the same place. It was a lot of fun to write. Thank you thank you thank you as always for reviewing. I'm so glad your enjoying my story. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/30/05 - 04:49PM |
19: The Bronze - Part 1 |
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Lovely chapter as always!! I am so excited about the upcoming chapters - they're all going to the Bronze ... hmm ... should be very, very interesting :) As always, I love it and, again, I can't begin to tell you how much I love Faith and Spike. There is definitely a lot of chemistry sparking there, and they haven't even been in that many scenes together - intense!!
Author's Response: Thanks, as always I'm glad your enjoying it. I too love the whole Faith and Spike thing. It's so much fun to write for the two of them. Thanks again for the review. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/30/05 - 12:15PM |
19: The Bronze - Part 1 |
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Like with the last chappies, this one was awesome as the others and i really really enjoyed that finally some of the four families are finally meeting each other face to face and i just love the interaction between Spike and Faith because i can tell sparks are beginning to fly between them hee hee! Anyways, i love love love this chappie and you're doing an awesome job Sinister. I so cannot wait to read more and hopefully in the next chappie Buffy and Angel will meet again he he. Please please update asap!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad everyone is enjoying the story. You reviews me a lot and like I told the others...they put a huge smile on my face. I should have the next chapter up pretty soon. I'm almost done with it. I might even have a second one done by tonight. Again, thanks so much for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/29/05 - 11:46PM |
19: The Bronze - Part 1 |
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As always great chapter! I love what you're doing with this. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks you. I'm glad your enjoying to. It always puts a smile on my face to know that people enjoy my work. =) |
| Peaches Girl |
11/29/05 - 09:39PM |
19: The Bronze - Part 1 |
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Another great chapter. I hope the others get together soon and find out what the deal in town is. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad your enjoying it and don't worry it wont take too much longer for them to find out about each other. I already know how I'm going to do it. Now all thats left is setting up for it...and then writing it of course lol. Anyway thanks agian for reviewing. It always puts a smile on my face. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/29/05 - 05:19PM |
18: Patrolling |
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As always, awesome update!! Buffy and Angel meeting again was just so perfectly done - and they were both so cute about it - trying to act all calm and cool when they're both really interested in each other. As for Spike and Faith - again, awesome. I would've loved to see the two of them hook up on the show - or to see Joss do a spin off involving the two of them. They just seem to work so well together. So yeah, me kinda rambling there, but again, LOVE the story. Update soon :)
Author's Response: As always, thank you so much for reviewing. You are the soul person who always reviews my work since I first started writing and I can't tell you how much that means to me. Anyway enough of the mushy stuff lol. Of course since I'm a huge B/A fan I had to have them meet again and be all cute towards each other lol. As for Spike and Faith I def agree. They should have hucked up on the show they would be so perfect together. I didn't even realize it but while I was writing their part of this chapter I realized how much fun it is to write for the two of them together. I've seen you write on many of your stories that you pretty much just write without a plan...I do the same thing. When I actually started writing that scene I had so much fun with it. Both characters are so much fun to write for alone and even more fun to write for when their together. Here I go...and you say you ramble lol. Well I think I'm done now. Thanks again for always reviewing and supporting. I'll prolly have the next chapter up by tonight if not the next two. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/29/05 - 12:58AM |
18: Patrolling |
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Awesome chappie you got here Sinister. i really love how everything is set up. Buffy meeting Angel again and Spike meeting Faith for the first time. Spike and Faith would make such a perfect bad ass couple don't ya think?? lol. Anyways, i completely love the chappie even though there is barely no action i loved it anyways. sooooo looking forward to reading more chappies. keep up the awesome work and please update asap!!!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm really glad your enjoying it. I also agree that Spike and Faith would make a great bad ass couple. Maybe they'll get together in my fic...oh who am I kidding I suck at suddle...of course their going to get together lol. I know the past couple of chapters have been a little action deprived but once everyone starts to figure out more and more there will be more and more action. Anyway thanks again for reviewing it means a lot. |
| Peaches Girl |
11/28/05 - 10:50PM |
18: Patrolling |
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ooooooo, I like this chapter. Just love the set up's going on. Cant wait to read the rest. Hope Buffy and Angel hook up at the Bronz.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it. It only had the 4 characters but I thought it was just perfect that way. As always thanks so much for all your support. |
| always angel |
11/28/05 - 09:03PM |
17: Progress Report |
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Great chapter! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad your enjoying it. I should have the next chapter up tonight. |
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