Reviews for The Hart of L.A.
| spikes girl |
10/15/05 - 08:16AM |
1: Chapter one |
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hey, yeah i remember reading this ages ago. once again great story, i'm glad you are bringing oz back, i always thought they should have done that in season 7. whats the go with spike though? will he be making an apearance or are you keeping him dead? i can't remember if you covered that in the original version
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again! I'm glad you liked it, I'm trying to make it read more smoothly. Spike will make.....an appearance. ;) |
| i_hate_mornings |
10/15/05 - 06:31AM |
1: Chapter one |
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Forgot to mention, you need to space the paragraphs in the second chap.
Author's Response: yeah, I'm about to fix it..It was really late when I posted that last chapter, and didn't want to fool with it right then.lol. |
| i_hate_mornings |
10/15/05 - 06:28AM |
2: Chapter Two |
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Hey. I'm one of the people who read this last time. That was before i became a member. I thought the story was great then and i still do now.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! I'm trying to make the story more smoothly. I'm glad you liked it! |
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