Reviews for Unmask
| Quortoth |
06/18/06 - 07:11PM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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| The format made me have to squint. [Ha, ha, could be me. :-)] I think that Faith gave a good pep talk, and Giles is around. I wonder, how far is Sara going to go with that Scythe too. Good Chapter. |
| MissEdith |
01/28/06 - 10:10PM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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Uh oh, things are not looking good for Faith. Or Willow, seeing as how she's helpless and alone with Faith, who is looking pretty darn suspicious at the moment. Anyway, I like this story a lot so far (I'm about to fall asleep, so I'll read the rest later) but I have 2 complaints. 1) the formatting in this chapter made me sad. Sometimes it was hard to tell who was talking. 2) I thought Sara broke Dawn's arm?
Author's Response: DAMN! I forgot that! It was about a month, between the chaptres, and it wasn't a huge plot point, so I forgot. Sorry. By the way, I went back, and changed it, so it says, she kickd Dawn, into the wall. As for the format, you'll be happy to know, I don't use it anymore. I though it'd make it easier to read, but looking back, it was a bad idea. Hope you like the new one better, and thanks for reading. |
| redmoon |
10/11/05 - 06:30PM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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You have a vicious (in the best sense of the word) knack for cliff-hangers. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, I try. |
| spikes girl |
10/10/05 - 03:20AM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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is faith evil again? it sounds like she is. i love dawn and xander together, i remember when she had a crush on him, but i never really thought about them as a couple, though i pulled it off and made it seem so natural/
Author's Response: I'm not at liberty to say, weather Faith, is evil, or not, but she is up to something. I'm glad you like Xander, and Dawn, I did it, because I think they would have gotten togeher if the show hade stayed on. (Watch season seven again sometime, they were going there). Thanks. |
| Timan |
10/10/05 - 02:28AM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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The slayers are really working for evil. that is such a cool idea and if you think about it it does make sense. i always wondered about that whole "one girl in all the world" thing. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yes, one Slayer really isn't enough is it. Which is why I liked the end of the show (though I know some people didn't) on the other hand, You can't change the rules like that, and expected no repercutions, which is where this story comes from. Thanks for reviewing. |
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