Reviews for New Beginnings
| BelovedSlayer |
12/25/05 - 06:31PM |
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wow. i love love love the self defense chappie!! totally kicked ass big time!! well written and action oriented just a little but it was perfect nevertheless. soon i'm gonna sign up for some karate classes and this chappie was just perfect to see some arrogant, overconfident jerk get his ass kicked by Buffy although in the chappie, she was worried that it might start false rumors about her like in her old school. cool chappie i'm definitely looking forward to seeing an update soon. have a great christmas!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter :-) |
| BelovedSlayer |
12/13/05 - 11:08PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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| its about damn time you updated this great fic!! lol!! so far i like the chappie alot and its good to see Buffy being introduced to Willo.. I only hope that she'll meet Angel really soon. im really looking forward to reading that part. Otherwise, this is a very well written chappie and writing don Willow's emotions of being nervous around the principle is definitely typical for her. please update soon!! |
| terry |
12/03/05 - 08:12PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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Poor dumb jock. I love that you deal with the psychological aspect of Buffy's character. She definitley has intamcy issues and they have to come from somewhere. It's great to read at least one very believable version of where those issues began.
Author's Response: Thank you! |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/26/05 - 02:41PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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I just started reading your fic today all the way from the first chapter to the last and i gotta say this: wow!!! You are doing an amazing job Javian!! I really love how Buffy being only a Potential is incorporated with the dreams she had about the vampires, along with her fighting with that bastard Hank. I can't believe he has the nerve to hit his daughter like that and yell and be drunk all the time. i feel really bad for Buffy but only hope she will start new beginnings and such in Sunnydale. even though the fighting, bickering, and all that seems repetitive, it makes Buffy's life seem more real because i'm sure alot of people go through that kind of stuff each day. I really love how your add painful memories from her past as well. it fits the fic really perfectly. And please, i hope you will do add Angel as a regular character here cuz i just love him!!!. Javian, you're writing here truly amazes me. you have done a awesome job and i'm so happy that i read this fic cuz i'm gonna add it to my faves now. Great work you done!!! please update asap!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much BelovedSlayer! I suppose I could keep Angel around and see what happens :-). Thanks again for the great review! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/19/05 - 06:19PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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| Love the first chapter - well written and interesting. So, here's me going to read the other chapters now :) |
| MissEdith |
10/10/05 - 02:04PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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Interesting story...I will look forward to the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thanks. Unfortunately I just realized that my timeframe is off; right now Buffy should be a freshman in the first month of high school...I'm going to go back and edit a couple things first. |
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