Reviews for New Beginnings
| terry |
12/03/05 - 08:12PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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Poor dumb jock. I love that you deal with the psychological aspect of Buffy's character. She definitley has intamcy issues and they have to come from somewhere. It's great to read at least one very believable version of where those issues began.
Author's Response: Thank you! |
| Angels Shadow |
12/01/05 - 05:32PM |
10: Thursday Morning |
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lol - Willow freaking out about her library book being a day late! So Willow, but so cute :) As always, I really, really love this, and I'm enjoying the focus on family issues right now. Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it, and I really appreciate how you've taken the time to give all this feedback almost every chapter! |
| Angels Shadow |
12/01/05 - 05:23PM |
9: Moving to Sunnydale |
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| You're welcome for the reviews ... this is such a joy to read the pleasure is really all mine. I feel so bad for Buffy having to be with her dad, but, at the same time, it is a very interesting twist as opposed to it being her and her mom. |
| Angels Shadow |
12/01/05 - 05:17PM |
8: Sunnydale Denial |
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| Brief yes, but excellent. As I've said before, this is fantastic. |
| Angels Shadow |
12/01/05 - 05:14PM |
7: Stormy Feelings |
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| I kind of agree with keeping out a huge fight scene between the two. It somehow seemed more intense just having Buffy waiting for him to leave her room while he tore it apart trying to find her. I have to agree, I'm excited about her arrival in Sunnydale. Great job so far, I'm really enjoying this!! |
| Peaches Girl |
11/29/05 - 11:13PM |
10: Thursday Morning |
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Great chapter. I see that Buffy's dad picked up where he left off in LA. Too bad for her. I hope he at least tries to clean up his act for her. Anyway, good job update soon.
Author's Response: When 'Alice' is introduced, there'll be some changes in Hank ;-). |
| MissEdith |
11/29/05 - 05:22PM |
10: Thursday Morning |
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Very nice. I can guess who Tony Harris's new drinking buddy is....
I like the misspelled name on the folder. When I read it, I thought it was a mistake, but then it wasn't! And it's such a normal thing too (my name has been misspelled soooooooo many times).
Author's Response: lol thanks, I get that a lot too. I like adding in little details like that, for some reason. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/29/05 - 01:17AM |
10: Thursday Morning |
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Awesome chappie Javian. i love that its almost completely normal, not having to deal with anything supernatural for a while but i do feel bad for Xander because of his crackhead father and his drunkingness but i gotta say having normal problems like those make the gang seem more normal and all and that's what i really love about this fic. Anyways, you're writing this story very very well and you have amazing writing skills as well. keep up the awesome work and please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm putting supernatural stuff on hold, and focusing on the family and school stuff for a couple chapters. Glad you're liking it so far, and I'll try to get the next chapter up soon! |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/26/05 - 02:41PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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I just started reading your fic today all the way from the first chapter to the last and i gotta say this: wow!!! You are doing an amazing job Javian!! I really love how Buffy being only a Potential is incorporated with the dreams she had about the vampires, along with her fighting with that bastard Hank. I can't believe he has the nerve to hit his daughter like that and yell and be drunk all the time. i feel really bad for Buffy but only hope she will start new beginnings and such in Sunnydale. even though the fighting, bickering, and all that seems repetitive, it makes Buffy's life seem more real because i'm sure alot of people go through that kind of stuff each day. I really love how your add painful memories from her past as well. it fits the fic really perfectly. And please, i hope you will do add Angel as a regular character here cuz i just love him!!!. Javian, you're writing here truly amazes me. you have done a awesome job and i'm so happy that i read this fic cuz i'm gonna add it to my faves now. Great work you done!!! please update asap!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much BelovedSlayer! I suppose I could keep Angel around and see what happens :-). Thanks again for the great review! |
| MissEdith |
11/24/05 - 01:30PM |
7: Stormy Feelings |
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| I can't wait until they get to Sunnydale! I like the little bit about the clock. I'm not sure why, it just seemed like a nice touch. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/19/05 - 06:40PM |
6: Breaking the News |
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Intense chapter, and quite a cliffhanger there. I would think the dream plays into her being a Potential. Again, love the story, and here's hoping for an update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your great reviews! I'll try to get the next chapter up soon. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/19/05 - 06:31PM |
3: New Freshmen |
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| Wonderful chapter - you really have the Willow and Xander characterizations down. Especially Xander - very well written and very Xander, especially with the Angel part. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/19/05 - 06:25PM |
2: One Memory |
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| Wow - powerful chapter. My heart goes out to Buffy. Again, well written. Fantastic story so far!! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/19/05 - 06:19PM |
1: Buffy's Memories |
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| Love the first chapter - well written and interesting. So, here's me going to read the other chapters now :) |
| MissEdith |
11/13/05 - 08:54PM |
6: Breaking the News |
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Oh god, poor Buffy. That was very well-written. My only complaint is that the dream thing seemed a bit on the cheesy side (although I do love cheese, lol).
Author's Response: Yeah, I see what you mean, it is kinda cheesy. I'll have to work on my dream stuff. Thanks for the feedback! |
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