Reviews for Phantom
| lessthanangelic1 |
10/31/05 - 10:49PM |
14: Chapter Thirteen |
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i don't think that the scheme is really all that elaborate...it's exactly like the one in the movie only made up earlier. It was another WONDERFUL chapter...and I can't wait to see what you write next, i'm positively quivering in anticipation...alright so not really...i just never get to use the word quiver that often.......anyways update soon please and remember to shoot me a reminder e-mail if you've got time!
Author's Response: lol - thanks again! I'm so glad it didn't come across as being hard to follow. When I reread it, I just worried that it seemed too out there for some reason, especially for people who haven't seen the movie. Thank you so much again, and I'll remember the email :) |
| BelovedSlayer |
10/31/05 - 09:20PM |
14: Chapter Thirteen |
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so far i really like how the gang is planning to capture Riley into this and im sooo looking forward to seeing that it would be one of the best parts out of this entirely awesome fantastic fic!! right now i can't even express enough words at how much i love this fic and the way you are doing such a fantastic job on this. i really loved it lots and its good to see you finally updated on this since i was so impatient to see the next chappie. awesome fic and please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Once more, big smile here :) Thank you so much. I'm glad you like the plan ... now I can't wait to get it into action. I know this chapter took a little longer than usual - sigh, so many Halloween parties :) Since I've been writing this story I made my husband dress up as the Phantom. Turned out to be a really cool costume - and, surprise, he actually liked it. Okay, anyway, thank you so much again for all your support, and I hope to have something up soon! |
| Peaches Girl |
10/31/05 - 09:01PM |
14: Chapter Thirteen |
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I love this, cant wait to see Reiley get his. Keep up the good work. Your writing is fantastic and I am totally captivated.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm so happy you're enjoying it. |
| DarkAvenger |
10/31/05 - 07:29PM |
1: Prologue |
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FINALLY an update!!!!!!! slightly complicated, but very good.
Author's Response: lol - yeah, I know, it was one of the chapters that, again, seemed a bit convoluted once I had it all written down, but for plot purposes, I needed to at least get the plan out there. Hopefully, it will make a bit more sense in coming chapters. Thank you so much for the review and for all your support. You have no idea how much I appreciate it :) |
| jiajo |
10/30/05 - 06:52PM |
13: Chapter Twelve |
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fantastic. combined my favourite tv show with my favourite film. cant wait to see what teh next chapter holds!
Author's Response: Hey, you're a new face on here :) So glad to hear from you, and thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you like it. Wasn't it such a great movie though?? I am trying to stick as close to the plotline of the Phantom as possible. Well, obviously, with the Phantom as the hero, it makes it a bit difficult, but I'm trying :) Thanks so much again for the review, I sincerely hope you keep reading! |
| always angel |
10/27/05 - 01:20PM |
13: Chapter Twelve |
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For a moment there you had me scared that Alexander was going to die. I'm glad Willow accepted Angel for what he is. It'll make him see that not everybody will shun him. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, I could never have Alexander die (its weird using his full name, but somehow, I can't see them using the nickname Xander in 19th century France) ... and Willow always was such a sweetheart. I could never see her judging anyone based on what they look like, and I believe that was a moment of understanding for Angel. It won't be so easy for him to give up the mask - his security blanket more or less - but he will become less afraid of what people will think. Thank you so much again for all the reviews! |
| i_hate_mornings |
10/27/05 - 05:49AM |
13: Chapter Twelve |
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Fantastic updates as usual. Still haven't seen the movie but i can bet this is better
Author's Response: Oh, and once again, I love hearing that :) I'm so glad you like it, and thank you so much again for all your support. |
| lessthanangelic1 |
10/26/05 - 10:37PM |
13: Chapter Twelve |
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alright...cheerleading days are gonna seep out here but.....
a-w-e-s-o-m-e....awesome, awesome...totally!
i think that about sums it up! i can't wait till i find out what's coming up next! keep up the great job!
Author's Response: lol - thank you so much! If I can bring out the cheerleading days, then I must be doing my job :) Thanks so much again - I hope to get the next chapter up soon! |
| BelovedSlayer |
10/26/05 - 09:27PM |
1: Prologue |
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i really love the last chappie and it was so great to see Angel saving Alexander's life. And to see Willow meet him for the first time. Now i'm hoping the best part of the entire fic is coming up i assume. Finding a way to prove Riley's behind the murderer. he's such a bastard lol!! well. like i said before, i really totally love this fic and you are doing such a fantastic job on this you should be proud of yourself for making such a beautiful and amazing fic!. keep up the fantastic work and please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much again. Once more, I must say, your reviews bring such a smile to my face :) I've been busy with Halloween parties and such over the weekend, so its taking awhile for the next chapter. Hopefully, I'll have something soon. Thanks so much again for all your amazing support! |
| BelovedSlayer |
10/25/05 - 03:39PM |
1: Prologue |
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i really liked this chappie alot. i mean, Cordelia was really funny on BTVS so really i didn't hate her or anything. She was really funny to watch, especially with Xander. I think you should keep this chappie. if you made mistakes before, don't you have to redeem yourself to make up for them?? I think this chappie would be a great addition because now there's possibly another witness that could show that the asshole pig Riley was behind the murderer so i say go for it and keep this chappie!!! You fic rocks!!! Update really really soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the input! I'm so happy those who reviewed enjoyed it because I really, really wanted Cordy to redeem herself. Plus, this idea does work better toward my whole "catching Riley" thing. Thank you so much again, I really appreciate it! |
| always angel |
10/24/05 - 11:12PM |
12: Chapter Eleven |
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I like this chapter. Its good to see that Cordelia has a heart. Can't wait to see Riley get what he deserves.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the input. Boy, I really hope I can live up to Riley getting his in the end. Everyone seems so anxious for it (not of course that I'm not incredibly anxious to write it) - just hope I don't disappoint when the time comes. Thank you so much again :) |
| Peaches Girl |
10/24/05 - 09:42PM |
12: Chapter Eleven |
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I really love this chapter. I never liked Cordy too much but not to the point of bashing. She did have good qualities and I like were you are going with this. Cant wait to see Reiley get his.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the input - I really appreciate it. Yeah, Cordy did have her moments on the show when you just wanted to slap her, but all in all, I always found her character to be really refreshing because she had no problem saying exactly what was on her mind - just like Anya :) Anyway, thanks again! |
| Sinister |
10/21/05 - 12:56PM |
11: Chapter Ten |
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I've been kind of busy lately so it took me a while to read your updates but after reading the last 3 chapters, I couldn't have said it better myself. BelovedSlayer, you are completely right in everything you said. This is absolutly amazing! I honestly think that this story may possably be my favorit story in this entire site. The way you capture the emotions of the characters is incredable and you always keep the suspence alive. Your doing an excellent job. Please never ever stop writing and update ASAP because I'm dying to know what happens next. And thank your so much for those kind words in the begining of the chapter. It really means a lot to know that such an amazing writer would say that about me, thank you so much. Again, I can't stress it enough, amazing job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much - your words truly mean a lot to me. I can't express my gratitude enough! Its truly an honor to me for you to say you consider this among your favorites, especially since there are so many awesome and talented authors on this site who create such fabulous stories. Again, I can't thank you enough - your praise is deeply appreciated :) |
| BelovedSlayer |
10/21/05 - 01:28AM |
11: Chapter Ten |
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First of all Angels Shadow, i wanna say thank you soooooo much for the shoutout, i really loved it and it made me beamed with sooooo much pride and it made me feel so damn happy so my thank yous go out to you!!! You are truly one of the best and you know that!!!!! Second, i really am truly just amazed and awed about the latest chappie. it is sooooo beautiful yet somewhat sad and i really really love the lyrics as well when i read them!!!! the whole chappie entirely with the rest of the fic is sooo well written and sooo beautiful and touching at the same time!!!. Words and gratitude cannot express how much i love the way you write this beautiful and inspiring fic!!! it touched my heart and im thinking it did the same to all the other readers and i almost cried at the end of the chappie and i truly hope that Riley will get his sorry ass busted!! it disgusted me that he said he loved Buffy but he was only acting like a monster that he is. i cannot wait til they caught him in the act its gonna be sooo sweet like fine wine!! hee hee. As always, you have done such an amazing job and reading this beautiful fic has blown my mind. You are such a fantastic writer and keep it up and im so looking forward to reading the next chappie!!!! I am sooo proud of you and your work if that sounds a bit corny he he but true!!!
Author's Response: Wow - again I say wow - your reviews are so sweet and so touching - they always make me smile. To know that you think so highly of my writing is truly an honor. I appreciate all of your praise more than words can say. Again, thank you for the fantastic review ... it really means so very much :) |
| always angel |
10/21/05 - 12:05AM |
11: Chapter Ten |
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The scene between Buffy and Angel was so sweet and moving. It made me cry. I hopeBuffy can be strong and get through the plan. Riley really needs to be stopped. Thank you so much for your kind words. I am honored that a writer as great as you are thinks my stuff is good. :)
Author's Response: Thank you again for all the great reviews. And I'm so glad to know I was able to pull of the emotional angsty stuff ... thank you so much for telling me that it really was a moving scene. And I think Buffy can be strong, but, alas, the road to happiness is never an easy one :) Thanks again - keep reading and keep writing. You and Peaches Girl really have a fantastic story going on with The Mind is a Terrible thing. Really, I'm so hooked and dying to see what happens next! |
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