Reviews for Hell on Earth: The last slayer
| slayerfest |
07/12/06 - 02:28PM |
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You had my attention from word one. You had even more of my attention when you described the post-apocalyptic Los Angeles. That sort of thing is quite exactly genius. Glad to see Xander (?) is in it. I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Oh i get much worse then that. aside from the bad language Becky's gonna be going through the ringer. thanks for reviewing |
| Psyche2 |
11/11/05 - 09:41AM |
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Whoa...this is amazing...the backstory is incredible! Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. funny thing about the backstory is i didn't know i was putting in half the details until i started writing them. thanks for reviewing. |
| filmtheory |
10/29/05 - 06:41PM |
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Awesome premise. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: thanks. I try and may my stories as interesting as possible. trust me when i say i put this girl through the wringer |
| Peaches Girl |
10/07/05 - 09:05PM |
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wow, you have captured my attention. Cant wait to see it explained more. Could the girl be Angels kid of ex-lover maybe. And who turned Willow. You know the vamp Willow was a wild one, I kind of liked her as a vamp. good start.
Author's Response: you think Willow as a vamp is wild imagine her as a Vampire-Witch. having all the strengths of a vamp plus the Goddess power she got at the end of series seven. trust me when i say the problems for Becky have just begun |
| axel |
10/07/05 - 09:35AM |
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Willow's a Vampire, The other vamp, seem unkillalbe,There screwed, There completly screwed. Great so far, sould be intresting to see how it got this way, keep it up.
Author's Response: will do. i promise you that the story is going to get a lot darker from here |
| spikes girl |
10/07/05 - 02:50AM |
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sorry in the review i just posted, it was meant to be "vampire witch". that should make sense now/
Author's Response: it's cool. i knew which witch is which. to answer your question yeah but i tried not to be that obvious. you'll find out what's happening latter on. |
| spikes girl |
10/07/05 - 02:48AM |
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| hey great first chapter. is the 40 yr old guy in the van xander? or is this set way way past the show? vampire which, thats gotta be hard to beat. |
| always angel |
10/07/05 - 01:54AM |
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Interesting start, you left me wanting more. I gotta ask, did Becky and Angelus have a thing.
Author's Response: Now that would be telling. the one thing i will say is the situation is a lot more complicated then just Becky and Angelus. |
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