Reviews for Hell on Earth: The last slayer
| Peaches Girl |
10/21/05 - 09:57PM |
8: Chapter 7: Finding the grey |
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All I can say is, you are the twist master. I thought I knew where you were going then, boom, you turn it around. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. i like to keep people on their toes. |
| axel |
10/20/05 - 10:36PM |
8: Chapter 7: Finding the grey |
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Just when we think we have the answers, you change the question's Really looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm treating Becky like a cross between evil Faith and Conner. I didn't want to end up with a one dimensional slayer who just hits people a lot. the girl had to have depth and layers. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
10/17/05 - 06:51PM |
7: Chapter 6: Harvest time |
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Damn, I want to say, I hope they get out, but then the world ends. Good Job.
Author's Response: I don't want to give away too much about the next chapter. all i will say is there is a big difference between Doing and going to do. Becky is going to learn this lesson. |
| axel |
10/14/05 - 07:16PM |
6: Chapter 5: Welcome to the hellmouth . . . Again |
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Damn, your really going to undo the whole series, aren't you? and doesn't that mean Becky will never exist? This is a really good (if a little depressing) story though, Keep it up.
Author's Response: Don't worry. I'll explain why Becky doesn't dissapear i'n later chapters. thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
10/11/05 - 06:25PM |
4: Chapter 3: Reaching for the star |
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To save the world Becky had to, well I better not ruin it for anyone. but it kind of sucks (not the story, just what she has to do) Good job.
Author's Response: It does suck for Becky. with Angelus one step ahead of her she hasn't had the best 24 hours of her life. thanks for the reviewing. |
| axel |
10/10/05 - 08:01PM |
3: Chapter 2: When family visits |
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So it was Angel signing away his shanshu, that caused it (If you can't trust an evil law firm) Sorry becky, you going to lose. Great Chapter.
Author's Response: I think spike has the same feeling. our slayer is definitely against the ropes. I always felt that the senior partners were smarter then Angel gave them credit for. and, like the wise man said, it only goes down hill from here. |
| axel |
10/08/05 - 11:22AM |
2: Chapter 1: Welcome home |
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Damn, And I thought Buffy was a bitch (Hey, who's been writing on my computer? Buffy's a wonderful person!) Becky puts her to shame, but apparantly Giles is somewhat reponsible for that, really want to see how all the other slayers were kill, Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks. I feel that Becky's that bitch because she has to be to survive. (oh and about buffy being a bitch you really should read the next chapter :) ) |
| Peaches Girl |
10/07/05 - 09:05PM |
1: Prologue |
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wow, you have captured my attention. Cant wait to see it explained more. Could the girl be Angels kid of ex-lover maybe. And who turned Willow. You know the vamp Willow was a wild one, I kind of liked her as a vamp. good start.
Author's Response: you think Willow as a vamp is wild imagine her as a Vampire-Witch. having all the strengths of a vamp plus the Goddess power she got at the end of series seven. trust me when i say the problems for Becky have just begun |
| axel |
10/07/05 - 09:35AM |
1: Prologue |
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Willow's a Vampire, The other vamp, seem unkillalbe,There screwed, There completly screwed. Great so far, sould be intresting to see how it got this way, keep it up.
Author's Response: will do. i promise you that the story is going to get a lot darker from here |
| spikes girl |
10/07/05 - 02:50AM |
1: Prologue |
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sorry in the review i just posted, it was meant to be "vampire witch". that should make sense now/
Author's Response: it's cool. i knew which witch is which. to answer your question yeah but i tried not to be that obvious. you'll find out what's happening latter on. |
| spikes girl |
10/07/05 - 02:48AM |
1: Prologue |
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| hey great first chapter. is the 40 yr old guy in the van xander? or is this set way way past the show? vampire which, thats gotta be hard to beat. |
| always angel |
10/07/05 - 01:54AM |
1: Prologue |
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Interesting start, you left me wanting more. I gotta ask, did Becky and Angelus have a thing.
Author's Response: Now that would be telling. the one thing i will say is the situation is a lot more complicated then just Becky and Angelus. |
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