Reviews for Hell on Earth: The last slayer
| axel |
11/06/05 - 08:20PM |
16: Chapter 15: Where Angels fear to tread |
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You know, If I was those witches, I give Willow a spell that would turn her into like a chicken, or something, and just tell her it was the spell, she wanted. But I guess there not as smart as me. Keep it up.
Author's Response: You know young witches back then. They're not as smart as you and me. Also I think willow would have guessed a spell that would have turned her into poultry. Thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/05/05 - 12:54AM |
15: Chapter 14: The history of the future pt 4 |
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| Poor Becky. No wonder shes the way she is. So Dawn just got pregnant? Thats...interesting. Update soon. |
| always angel |
11/05/05 - 12:54AM |
15: Chapter 14: The history of the future pt 4 |
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Poor Becky. No wonder shes the way she is. So Dawn just got pregnant? Thats...interesting. Update soon.
Author's Response: I never said the Dawn *JUST* got pregnant. All i said is that she has a gap in her memory when this occurred. things will make sense when i go though that back story. |
| axel |
11/05/05 - 12:36AM |
15: Chapter 14: The history of the future pt 4 |
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Dawn hust got pregnant, without a father huh? Does she have the power to turn water to wine, by any chance? Good chapter.
Author's Response: Trust me there's this whole creepy back story I'm going to get into about Becky's birth and it's not who you think. |
| always angel |
11/05/05 - 12:19AM |
14: Chapter 13: The history of the future pt 3 |
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Damn, things just keep getting worse for them.
Author's Response: I know. the badness is not over yet for anyone. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/04/05 - 02:52AM |
14: Chapter 13: The history of the future pt 3 |
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So now we know. Hopfully Becky can fix this, but somehow I don't see a happy ending. Good story.
Author's Response: It does look that way doesn't it? Even though Angelus was restored to Angel back in 1996 Becky is still catatonic. things are definitely looking down but as Agent Smith once said "appearances can be deceiving". thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/03/05 - 11:04PM |
13: Chapter 12: The history of the future pt 2 |
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What are they gonna do with no Slayer? They are definatly SOL. So when we gonna find out who Becky's father is? I really like this story. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: What are they gonna do with no Slayer? a lot of running and hiding. as for Becky's father you have to wait and see. |
| Peaches Girl |
11/03/05 - 11:02PM |
13: Chapter 12: The history of the future pt 2 |
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Great chapter. I love that you are filling in the back story now. I am dying to know who the father of Becky is though.
Author's Response: I always planned to fill in the back story. the only thing that changed from my original idea is who is telling the story. as for Becky's father you have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/03/05 - 11:15AM |
13: Chapter 12: The history of the future pt 2 |
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| I meant tp say great. |
| axel |
11/03/05 - 11:15AM |
13: Chapter 12: The history of the future pt 2 |
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DAMN, no Slayer? That's not fair. Grat chapter!
Author's Response: Yep. Angelus is playing to win. to do that he needed to stop the slayers permanently. thanks for reviewing |
| spikes girl |
11/03/05 - 08:36AM |
13: Chapter 12: The history of the future pt 2 |
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as usual great chapter. When riley came in, at first i thought that you were writing his character all wrong because you made him nice. There is so much "riley bashing"going on at the mo, that i forgot he was actually a nice guy in the show! So congrats for having the only story that truely getting his character's personally spot on.
Author's Response: thanks for that. on thing that they don't realise about Riley is that he was a career soldier. he, himself, was not bad he was just following orders. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
10/30/05 - 09:49AM |
12: Chapter 11: The history of the future pt 1 |
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So that's what happend. If always wonderd if the Powers were evil, they never seemed to care about people to much. and I'm glad someone doing something about the shanshu being bad. I tried to do one awile back, but never could get it going. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. as i said in a previous reply i never thought the senior partners were stupid. it makes sense that they would give Angel the illusion that there was hope for a chance to bring back Angelus. also keep an eye on Judson Fox his story doesn't end in this flash back. |
| filmtheory |
10/29/05 - 06:41PM |
1: Prologue |
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Awesome premise. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: thanks. I try and may my stories as interesting as possible. trust me when i say i put this girl through the wringer |
| axel |
10/26/05 - 10:58PM |
10: Chapter 9: Truth be told |
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I love this story, I really thought Willow was going to, do what she was going to do to becky (which pretty much would have meat they lost) your keeping me, on my toes.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. i like to keep the story interesting and i try not to go down obvious roads. i can tell you that there is still one more surprise to go. thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
10/25/05 - 11:04PM |
9: Chapter 8: Becky’s run |
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Damn your mean (but I mean that in a good way) Great chapter.
Author's Response: Angelus didn't come back through time to give Becky flowers now did he? you have to remember Angelus is all about maximum damage. |
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