Reviews for Hell on Earth: The last slayer
| slayerfest |
07/14/06 - 05:48PM |
6: Chapter 5: Welcome to the hellmouth . . . Again |
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Or, you know, I will, since this story is finished.
Author's Response: Hahaha. that was a reflex action wasn't it. thanks for reviewing |
| slayerfest |
07/14/06 - 05:48PM |
6: Chapter 5: Welcome to the hellmouth . . . Again |
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| In a word: epic. I'm fascinated. Carry on. |
| slayerfest |
07/12/06 - 09:42PM |
3: Chapter 2: When family visits |
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Very, very nice so far. It is a hugely epic story, so I'll take it in small installments at a time. However, I'm definitely interested; the picture you've painted is fascinating. Very well-done.
Author's Response: The future isn't bright and it's only gonna get worse. thanks for reviewing |
| slayerfest |
07/12/06 - 02:28PM |
1: Prologue |
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You had my attention from word one. You had even more of my attention when you described the post-apocalyptic Los Angeles. That sort of thing is quite exactly genius. Glad to see Xander (?) is in it. I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Oh i get much worse then that. aside from the bad language Becky's gonna be going through the ringer. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/12/05 - 12:44AM |
22: Epilogue |
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I really love this story and am sad to see this part end. But i gotta ask, who is Becky's father?
Author's Response: i can't tell you that yet it's actually a part of the plot for the next fic "hell on earth: futures divided" what i will say is that it's going to be worth the wait. thanks for reviewing. |
| Peaches Girl |
11/12/05 - 12:12AM |
22: Epilogue |
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awesome story. It was gripping, I loved it. Hope you come out with that next fic soon. Cant wait to see where you go. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm actually ironing out the details of the next fic at the moment and should start working on "hell on earth: futures divided" in the next few days. thanks for reviewing. |
| Psyche2 |
11/11/05 - 09:41AM |
1: Prologue |
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Whoa...this is amazing...the backstory is incredible! Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. funny thing about the backstory is i didn't know i was putting in half the details until i started writing them. thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
11/11/05 - 08:16AM |
22: Epilogue |
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Great story, overall, I guess part two's coming, so maybe we'll still learn who beckys father is.
Author's Response: Yep. in fact I've decided to turn this into the hell on earth trilogy. keep your eyes open for "hell on earth: futures divided" coming soon. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/11/05 - 12:09AM |
20: Chapter 19: Frying pan, Fire |
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Looks like they're screwed...
Author's Response: it does doesn't it. this being the penultimate chapter everything will wrap up in the final instalment. thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
11/11/05 - 12:02AM |
20: Chapter 19: Frying pan, Fire |
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Who's this woman, she makes me think they might win, but at what cost, and will they be willing to pay it (sorry, it's late). Looking forward to seeing who it end, even if it's not a happy one.
Author's Response: since the next chapter is the final chapter you'll have the answers then. I'm a little sad the story's coming to a close but you know what they say about all good things. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/10/05 - 11:22PM |
18: Chapter 17: By order of the council |
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Travers is an ass. Its interesting to see the hostility between Buffy and Angel..
Author's Response: Well in this time line Buffy has no reason to trust Angel since the first time she met him he was servery hurting Becky. and, for the record, yes Travers is an ass. |
| axel |
11/10/05 - 10:03AM |
19: Chapter 18: The Enforcer |
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So, Willow's going to win? guess will no soon.
Author's Response: T minus three chapters and counting then all will be revealed (well almost). thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/09/05 - 10:57AM |
18: Chapter 17: By order of the council |
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Damn Quentin Travers, has he ever be good for anything? So the witches told them to bring her, the same witches that Willow just visted? I think I know where this is going. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Not exactly. The Witches told Quentin about the second slayer. Quentin travers is bringing her in to find out why she here. thanks for reviewing. |
| axel |
11/07/05 - 11:37PM |
17: Chapter 16: The Doppelgangland Problem |
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Good job. Does this mean Willow's already taken her powers' or is it just mental (I know you can't tell me yet)?
Author's Response: That will be cleared up next chapter. just before things get worse. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/07/05 - 09:45PM |
17: Chapter 16: The Doppelgangland Problem |
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Poor Xander I hope the others will find a way to help him. I have to say that it looks like vampire Willow is going to win. I really love this story! Update soon.
Author's Response: It certainly looks that way. we're on the home stretch with this story ('bout five chapters to go) but that doesn't mean I'm done with the surprises yet. thanks for reviewing |
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