Reviews for Currently Untittled
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:28PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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| I liked it, I agree with the Faith comment, but after the final ep of Buffy I was wondering that myself like, dude what happens if some of the new slayers go all baddie? then what u kno? I like this chapter, thou I dont really understand why it wuld take so long for her to get a watcher, but eh, its still good. |
| Monkey Pants |
12/16/05 - 09:43AM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Very well wriiten. It got me thinking a bit of faith, as she was interested in a kind of self-mutialtion. This character seems very interesting, and made me wonder what you plan to do with her.
Author's Response: I hope she didn't seem too much like Faith. I wnat to develop my own slayer and not have her seem anything like Buffy or Faith. Thanks for the review. |
| terry |
12/03/05 - 08:25PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Wow . . . cutting (something I explored in my own stroy) is such an odd phenomenon. I have very limited experience in this area and have never really understood people who ENJOY it. (I've known people who did it b/c they were with other ppl who did and didn't like it, just kind of went along). Anyway, the people I know who cut that actually enjoy it are very complex people. I'm sure this character will prove to be the same.
Author's Response: I really don't know that much about cutting either. One of my good friends in high school did it and when writing this story I thought it would be interesting to have a Slayer that did it. Thanks for the review. |
| filmtheory |
11/04/05 - 10:59PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Wow! Very short, but very, very intense chapter. I can’t wait to learn more about this very, very troubled slayer. She should definitely make for a very complex and intense character. I have to admit, I literally cringed while reading about the cutting. Your writing is very visceral and descriptive. The next chapter can’t come soon enough.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Honestly, I considered deleting this chapter and re-writing it. I was afriad that it wouldn't work well with the story but it fits her so well. Again, thanks for the review. |
| axel |
10/11/05 - 04:55PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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| I think the chapter's good. Now we have some Idea, what motivates her, which is important. since it's so short, You could, make it part of the next chapter, if that make you feel better. But I thinks it's fine the way it is. |
| Angels Shadow |
10/06/05 - 07:30PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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| Dark and short, but its good. It definitely leaves a sense of interest as to who this girl is and why she's really doing this to herself. Plus, I think it'll be interesting when you delve deeper into her life and reveal in more depth who abandoned her and why feeling invincible made her seek the Council's training. Very good so far! |
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