Reviews for The Right Thing
| Timan |
10/17/05 - 08:15AM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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| I really like the way you set up this fanfic. you get a sense from Buffy that she's happy but something about the new initiative doesn't sit right with her. fantastic job |
| littlewiccan |
10/16/05 - 02:01PM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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| I'm in awe of how quickly you update this story. Good job though. |
| Peaches Girl |
10/06/05 - 11:10PM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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Again, I like were you are going with this. Great story build. The general is a bad a**. Give me more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your input; I always wonder with my original characters and was hoping i did her well; i'm trying to make it obvious why she's just a little scary to Spike, and set her up to actually be a threat in taking on Buffy... :) |
| Peaches Girl |
10/05/05 - 09:16PM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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Cool story. I love a new spin. Buffy should ask her mom about being a witch too I think. Maybe they can do a battle together that would be cool too.
Author's Response: Hmmm...sorry, Joyce doesn't actually have much of a part in this story...not sure if she has any at all yet actually |
| littlewiccan |
10/05/05 - 08:48AM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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This is really good. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Keep me posted on how I'm doin'! :) |
| slayerfest |
10/04/05 - 11:24PM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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This is good stuff. I think, appearance-wise/gramatically, you're emphasizing too many words with the stars. The writing itself is enthralling. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review; I looked it over and you're soo right!! LOL I edited it so it should look a little better now :) Thanks for the constructive criticism, always helpful :) |
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