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axel 10/02/05 - 02:24PM 20: The Girl Who Wore Her Heart On Her Sleeve Signed
Really looking forward to the big finnish.

MissEdith 10/02/05 - 12:16PM 20: The Girl Who Wore Her Heart On Her Sleeve Signed
This is really good! I'm glad Angel's joining the story now. I have just 2 comments: 1) the last sentence got cut off, and 2) can you make the chapters longer? Some of them are really short.

Author's Response: 1) sorry about the sentence... crazy weekend i just tried to get it up and forgot to copy the entire thing from my Word Processor page.. 2) sorry about the shortness of the chapters but with family problems going on right now i barely have time to do my hw and post this story (but i try to keep it going for the readers) ... Maybe some time in the future when everything settles down i'll go back and revise it... but im happy you want more in the chapters and from now on i'll try to make them longer... thanks for the review
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