Reviews for The dawn of a new era (formaly known as a new dawn)
| blinddollie |
07/08/06 - 12:59AM |
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I'm really intrigued by this. Update soon!
Author's Response: thank you, and i will update soonish. i will try to get the next chapter out before uni starts up again at the end of this month |
| terry |
04/20/06 - 03:17PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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I love the hot, sexy, and sex-obsessed Dawn. After so much time aorund so much death and passion, you'd think she'd be a little more like you have her. Great story. I hope more is coming!
Author's Response: hey thanks for the kind words, i agree after everything she has grown up with, she would be able to handle everything so much better then the show let on. i'm just trying to show what would happen if she was allowed to spread her wings |
| Acila |
03/13/06 - 09:33PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Oooo, first time I'v read your story, even though you've read plenty of mine, so sorry for the late reaction...been slow on my reading cuz I was so busy with writing, ANYWAY...WOW I love this Idea, Hello Dawn of 2005 in the past...you have to make this a Spike/Dawn cuz that would just rock...And you have to save him ::gets on hands and knees begging:: and you have to update so we can find out what happens next..oh and shes a slayer with magick powers how kick ass is that...in short I love the story, and you need to update it soon ::kicks ya in da butt:: j/k
Good story though ^_^
Author's Response: lol wow thats heaps, nah i do need a bloody kick in the butt, i'm so slack i really wanna read my story and see where it goes but i don't wanna have to write it! lol i'm weird i know. but yeah i will force myself to sit down and try for another chapter tomorrow. and oh i just read ur latest update, so awesome and i'm going now to post another review. thanks again chickie! |
| filmtheory |
02/07/06 - 08:48PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Nice idea for a story. I'm anxious to see where you take this older, wiser Dawn. I'm a big fan of people doing more with the character than the show did. I can't wait to see what direction you take.
Author's Response: hey thanks so much, i realise i have been beyond slack with this, it has been months since i updated, i just kinda forgot. i'll get on it tonight and see if i can make any progress. it's sad but i'm liking the story line aswell, but i wish i wasn't the one writing it, cause i'm bound to screw it up soon! i'll try and get another chappie out in the next few days |
| Kevin |
10/10/05 - 05:50PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Great start! I love the reference back to season 7 scenes. I'm definitely interested to see what happens and why Dawn got changed. One nit-picking thing- you occasionally you write the word “your” instead of “you’re.” If you’re trying to say “you are,” you should write “you’re.” (Sorry. I was an English major. I'm still in recovery).
Author's Response: Lol thanks I’ll try to be more aware of that when typing. Also, it is probably obvious that I am messing up the tenses, I can never get those right, so just bare with me, unless someone wants to nominate themselves as a beta reader... anyone anyone??? I'm starting to worry that whatever I write, I’m going to end up disappointing someone's expectations, let me know if that happens, cause it's the only way I’ll know to fix it.
Thanks again for the review; I have a few surprises in store about Dawn that I’m saving for later.
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| toshie |
10/01/05 - 06:01AM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Luv it! Can't wait to see how a bit of foreknowledge is handled... and if it will affect Buffy and Spike's failure to say how they feel - or act on it?
Author's Response: hey thanks so much for your review. i was a fan of buffy and spike as a "couple" though i'm not really a fan of her personally. atm i'm not sure what direction i'll take this, so i guess we'll see. thanks again. |
| jl1980 |
09/29/05 - 09:38AM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Really, really good start!! Leaves me anxious for that next chapter!!! I'm sure it's great just POST IT POST IT POST IT!!!!! :) :) :) Yeah, I kinda like the script format, keeps it simple and keeps the dialogue going... can't wait to see what happens to Dawn, how she's different, how everybody reacts... :) First fic, huh? Great job!!!
Author's Response: Hey thanks so so much! yeah i got the script format idea from Gumboy's fic series The Watcher. There are subtle changes in her, and it will become obvious that someone in particular is a big influence on her, buffy might not be to happy bout this tho. thanks again, i'll post the next chapter today. |
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