Reviews for The dawn of a new era (formaly known as a new dawn)
| blinddollie |
07/08/06 - 12:59AM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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I'm really intrigued by this. Update soon!
Author's Response: thank you, and i will update soonish. i will try to get the next chapter out before uni starts up again at the end of this month |
| BuffyAnya |
07/07/06 - 02:20AM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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I love it!!!!
You are leaving me at a cliffhanger here....And i hate cliffhangers Also I love how theres hints of things like Dawn being a slayer and Anya dying. Very clever and can't wait until you write more!!!
Author's Response: hey thanks so much. its annoying the crap out of me, i still have all these ideas of where to take the story but i just can't get them out, hopefully i will, eventually, maybe |
| terry |
04/20/06 - 03:17PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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I love the hot, sexy, and sex-obsessed Dawn. After so much time aorund so much death and passion, you'd think she'd be a little more like you have her. Great story. I hope more is coming!
Author's Response: hey thanks for the kind words, i agree after everything she has grown up with, she would be able to handle everything so much better then the show let on. i'm just trying to show what would happen if she was allowed to spread her wings |
| Acila |
04/14/06 - 10:01PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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Hey Missy! Were is that update!!!!!! I'm ganna cry If I don't get to read more soon.....Look, see, you're ganna make me cry, not dammit update....J/K, well about the crying part, but you really need to update chickie!!!!! You're a amazing writer with a really good Idea, don't let it go ::gets on knees and beggs::
Ok, I'm good now ^_^ .....
No Wait....
UPDATE!!!
Ok now I'm good ^_^ :P
Author's Response: lol tell you what i'll update my story when u update yours, any of yours. |
| Acila |
03/13/06 - 09:33PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Oooo, first time I'v read your story, even though you've read plenty of mine, so sorry for the late reaction...been slow on my reading cuz I was so busy with writing, ANYWAY...WOW I love this Idea, Hello Dawn of 2005 in the past...you have to make this a Spike/Dawn cuz that would just rock...And you have to save him ::gets on hands and knees begging:: and you have to update so we can find out what happens next..oh and shes a slayer with magick powers how kick ass is that...in short I love the story, and you need to update it soon ::kicks ya in da butt:: j/k
Good story though ^_^
Author's Response: lol wow thats heaps, nah i do need a bloody kick in the butt, i'm so slack i really wanna read my story and see where it goes but i don't wanna have to write it! lol i'm weird i know. but yeah i will force myself to sit down and try for another chapter tomorrow. and oh i just read ur latest update, so awesome and i'm going now to post another review. thanks again chickie! |
| filmtheory |
02/07/06 - 08:48PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Nice idea for a story. I'm anxious to see where you take this older, wiser Dawn. I'm a big fan of people doing more with the character than the show did. I can't wait to see what direction you take.
Author's Response: hey thanks so much, i realise i have been beyond slack with this, it has been months since i updated, i just kinda forgot. i'll get on it tonight and see if i can make any progress. it's sad but i'm liking the story line aswell, but i wish i wasn't the one writing it, cause i'm bound to screw it up soon! i'll try and get another chappie out in the next few days |
| Quortoth |
12/15/05 - 05:15PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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Your story so far starts off pretty good. I get that feeling that you're going a little fast but I do that and can't get it to stop. :-P Other than that, great. I was laughing. So blunt. WWWEEEE!!:-P, :-)
Author's Response: hey thanks for the kind words, and yeah i know some parts happen to quickly. mainly the second chapter, but i just wanted buffy out of the way so i could focus soully of dawn. thanks again |
| Kevin |
12/10/05 - 11:52PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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Another great chapter. I love the older, sexier Dawn. I also like the hints of other pwoers (Fireball anyone)? Please keep going. This story is AWESOME!
Author's Response: thanks heaps, i know i'm taking forever to update, but my computer is in the shop. i have to use a friends to come unline atm, but as soon as i get it back i'll post another chapter. |
| Kevin |
12/01/05 - 05:43PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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Another great chapter. I love the references to thigs that happen in season 7 Buffy and seaosn 4 Angel. Also, I love the sexier version of Dawn.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the kind words, i always thought the TV show didn't do Dawn justice, she acted like qa child cause thats the role the scoobly gang put her in. but now she can hold her own, so it should be interesting
Author's Response: thanks so much for the kind words, i always thought the TV show didn't do Dawn justice, she acted like qa child cause thats the role the scoobly gang put her in. but now she can hold her own, so it should be interesting |
| axel |
11/19/05 - 11:19PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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Good job! I'm a little confuse as to how she could make a fireball, since she only a slayer, but I guess you explain that later. By the way, sorry for your loss.
Author's Response: thanks, sorry i thought i mentioned it briefly when she was telling spike about her life. Dawn does a little magic now, willow has been teahcing her. |
| slayerfest |
11/19/05 - 09:13PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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Lovely! I laughed several times. You've got an excellent story going here; keep it up! (I'm sorry for your losses.)
Author's Response: thanks so much for the kind words, it really means a lot especially when i'm not sure if the story is decent or actually quite crap. i'll try not to keep you guys waiting as long for the next chapter! thanks again. |
| Timan |
11/19/05 - 06:13PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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“Welcome Dawn of the future. I agree, you have aged several years. Does this mean you have orgasms now?” i seriously loved that Anya line. so are you going to tell us how dawn becomes a slayer? update soon so i can find out. good job
Author's Response: thanks i love that anya line to, she is such a priceless character. and yeah i wll explain it all in the next chapter, hopefully. |
| Sinister |
10/14/05 - 10:48PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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Awesome story. It seems a little fast but with some stories thats neccessary so this story could be one of them. Other then that I really like it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: hey thanks, yeah i know i know it was fast in getting rid of will and buffy, it's just that i wanted them out of the picture for the next few chapters so that i could focus on dawn more. and i know they accepted the explaination quickly, but i just felt like i had to much dialogue as it was.
I'm almost done with the 3rd chapter, just having a little trouble with it. though i now have a beta reader, Kevin, who is an auther on the site, so the rest of the chapters should be of better quality. |
| Kevin |
10/10/05 - 05:50PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Great start! I love the reference back to season 7 scenes. I'm definitely interested to see what happens and why Dawn got changed. One nit-picking thing- you occasionally you write the word “your” instead of “you’re.” If you’re trying to say “you are,” you should write “you’re.” (Sorry. I was an English major. I'm still in recovery).
Author's Response: Lol thanks I’ll try to be more aware of that when typing. Also, it is probably obvious that I am messing up the tenses, I can never get those right, so just bare with me, unless someone wants to nominate themselves as a beta reader... anyone anyone??? I'm starting to worry that whatever I write, I’m going to end up disappointing someone's expectations, let me know if that happens, cause it's the only way I’ll know to fix it.
Thanks again for the review; I have a few surprises in store about Dawn that I’m saving for later.
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| Angels Shadow |
10/10/05 - 06:52AM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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Great story so far - have to agree I'm interested to see if Dawn's knowledge will change the future ... should be interesting - keep it coming!
Author's Response: hey thanks. yeah somethings will be different for sure, but i'm not going to give anything away, u'll just have to keep reading |
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