Reviews for Into the Night
| Icequeen |
02/25/06 - 06:57PM |
20: Chapter Nineteen |
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I've just read this whole story so far...and it's just absolutely amazing! I like how it's original, and your new characters, Callie and Sterling are really great! Update soon, because I'm dying to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much. Its always nice to see new reviewers, especially for this story. Your words mean a lot to me, and its so wonderful to hear that you're enjoying it. Unfortunately, life has kept me away from the site and the writing for quite awhile. This is actually my first time checking back in about a month ... but, enough rambling. Hopefully, I'll be active on the site again soon ... but for now, just know I really appreciate and I thank you so much for the encouragement :) |
| Sinister |
02/05/06 - 09:17AM |
20: Chapter Nineteen |
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| Wow...very intense chapter. I was on the edge of my seat while reading it...literally. I love the tention between Buffy and Angel its just so amazingly writen and very interesting and intense. You really know how to keep us waiting for those two crazy kids to finally get together. You just keep teasing us with this stuff lol. Anyway as always this was an awesome chapter. The whole feel of the scene was incredable. I can't belive this is the last chapter posted though...get to work young lady I need more lol. Anyway amazing job as usual and I can't wait to read more. |
| Sinister |
02/05/06 - 08:52AM |
19: Chapter Eighteen |
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| Another amazing chapter. I can't stress enough how much i'm enjoying this story. This chapter was so sad though. Poor Buffy...those ass holes Santo and Callie are taking everything away from her. I'm so glad Sterling is still alive though. I love his character. Again this was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see where your going to take this next. |
| Sinister |
02/05/06 - 08:35AM |
18: Chapter Seventeen |
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| Another amazing chapter. I'm so glad that Buffy and Angel finally hucked up however breaf the moment was. It sucks that Angel can't get any play though. But the two characters you've created are meant to be so I know they'll find a way around it. Anyway great chapter. I can't wait to see Buffy and Angel kick the bad guys asses. Your story is amazing and I can't wait to read more. |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:35PM |
17: Chapter Sixteen |
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Awesome! I love how jealous Buffy obviously was when she saw Eris in the room with Angel. I really hope that Eris doesn't double cross Angel. If she tried hard enough I think she could even reform her ways and be a very good asset the side of good. I hope we find out more about Angel's past soon too. It seems very interesting. I'm also just itching for Buffy and Angel to get together. You really know how to keep us waiting. Their attraction for each other will inevitably bring them together...but when?! lol. Anyway excellent chapter as usual. I'm just loving this story so much.
Author's Response: Angel's past is something that will likely take an entire book to tell, and I'm just throwing in bits and pieces to make you want more :) As for Eris, I don't really think she'll ever really be one of the good guys, but hey, maybe it'll happen somewhere down the road. There aren't any immediate plans for it though. As for Buffy and Angel ... well, its going to be a very long and very tough road for them. If I do get to write a book series, it just wouldn't seem right that they get their happily ever after right away. Likely, they'll even have relationships with other people along the way before things eventually fall into place for them - the idea being that that would be the last book in the series because I've got something really cool in mind for that ... something that will ensure that they really will be together forever and all the other good mushy emotional stuff :) As always, I can't thank you enough for all the wonderful reviews. Your words mean so much to me, and I really truly appreciate it more than I can say!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!! |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:28PM |
16: Chapter Fifteen |
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I am definitly smelling a love triangle between Buffy, Angel and Sterling. The way both boys were all worried about Buffy was priceless. There is definitly some tention between Buffy and Angel though and a relationship would be super hard with both of their hot tempers. Another great chapter as always. I hope Sterling will be ok though...I'm worried about him.
Author's Response: Definitely a bit of a triangle ... at least for a little while. I have some things planned for the next one that will sufficiently end any thoughts of Buffy potentially having a relationship with Sterling. Certain things will come to light that would make that relationship impossible. But I can't say too much or it ruins surprises :) |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:24PM |
15: Chapter Fourteen |
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lol I love the tention between Angel and Sterling. As for Callie...hate her! I hope she gets what she deserves in the end and I really hope that Buffy is the one who gives it to her. Another wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Mostly everyone seems to have the same reaction to Callie, and I'm really happy about that. It means I'm doing my job at creating a good villain :) I can't say what I have in store for Callie, but she'll get what she deserves ... eventually :) |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:21PM |
14: Chapter Thirteen |
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Oh yea...sorry I'm reviewing for the same chapter again but I forgot to mention the phycic. That was a little weird and the first thing she said sounds like its forshadowing something about Buffy maybe? Anyway I just wanted to mention that that part was really cool too. Nice work!
Author's Response: Yes, definitely foreshadowing, but again not something that will be revealed through the course of this story. All that foreshadowing and the significance of Buffy having the ring and pendant will be the focus of the next story. |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:19PM |
14: Chapter Thirteen |
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Wow Angel really is super loyel to the Order. They're rules are dumb though I have to say. Buffy didn't do anything and she shouldn't be punished for something her ass hole father did. I'm glad Angel didn't turn her in. Those two may try and fight it but they have something between them and I just can't wait till they give in to it (but I hope Angel doesn't give in too much of course). I find it odd though that Angel pretty much ignored the ring...he was more interested in the neckless which was obvious but ignoring the ring completely was strainge. Anyway I'm seriously hooked onto this story and I can't wait to read more of it it's amazing. Great job!
Author's Response: This is another chapter/aspect that will likely get rewritten. I like the idea of the Order and Council being super backwards and archaic with ridiculous rules and regulations (because eventually, the idea is going to be for the Council to be overthrown ... way down the road of course, and still only an idea not completely fleshed out). But I want Angel's reaction to be different ... not quite so harsh ... if I'm even making sense ... I ramble too much. Anyway, as for the ring, thats pretty much a non factor right now, though I think I should have a brief explination regarding it. In a former version of this story, I did. The moon and bow and arrow represent Artemis, goddess of moon and hunt. But yeah, again the pendant is the main focus for now. The significance of the ring won't likely be revealed until the next book. |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:13PM |
13: Chapter Twelve |
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Interesting...very interesting. This story is a little confusing at times but I'm guessing its one of those things where it's confusing at first and then little by little it gets more and more understandable. I have to say nice twist with Eris though. I never would have thought she would be on the not end of the world side...just didn't seem like her type. Anyway another amazing chapter. Great job.
Author's Response: Hopefully some of that confusion will be worked out through rewriting, but at the same time you're right, there are certain things that just aren't supposed to be understood for awhile. Its what will hopefully lead this into being a credible series instead of just a stand alone book ... if of course I ever get it finished and to a publisher. As for Eris, she likes destruction but not to that extent ... kind of how Spike went to Buffy to help stop Angel at the end of season 2. He was still evil, but he didn't want to see Angel suck the world into hell. |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:10PM |
12: Chapter Eleven |
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Another wonderful chapter. Poor Sterling I can only imagin how heart he must have been. Angel and Buffy seem to getting along nicely though. Their like kids lol. Playing pool and air hockey at a time like this. Crazy kids lol. Anyway I know I've said it before but you really have an amazing story here. I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review - for all the reviews :) As I go back and read this section, I'm not really certain it'll stay in the final draft. It seems a little out of place to me, but we'll see. I've still in major rewrite mode, so who knows what'll happen?? |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 03:06PM |
11: Chapter Ten |
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Excellent! I love that Angel knows that Buffy is the one from his dreams. It's fitting that at least one of them should know right off the bat. Anyway great chapter. I love how Buffy and Angel's relationship is developing. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I really do like having him know while she has no clue. Thanks again! |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 10:57AM |
10: Chapter Nine |
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Feww...I'm so glad he got to her in time. Although it seems like she was doing a damn good job for a while there. I love the obvious spark that they have and I can't wait for them to find out their the ones in each other's dreams. It should be very very interesting. I'm also excited to see Sterling's reaction to Buffy and Angel's obvious attraction to each other and how hes going to feel about their new partnership. Amazing job as always! Truely wonderful!
Author's Response: Super slayer strength or no, she can still kick butt :) Thanks again!! |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 10:53AM |
9: Chapter Eight |
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Nice work! That's so tipical of Buffy (even though it's really not Buffy) to go out just for the hunt. Always about the greater good or in this case just to find some ass to kick. Her aunt sounds like a real bitch though I love that Angel gave her a peice of his mind lol. Excellent chapter as usual.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I never wanted Buffy to just be a hardened mercenary in it for the money. I wanted there to be that part of her that just wants to do it without the money involved. It sets her apart from the other mercenaries and kinda makes her an outcast. |
| Sinister |
01/24/06 - 10:51AM |
8: Chapter Seven |
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Aww...poor Brynna. That must be so scary for her. When I think about her being in that possition I think about how I would feel (also being 19) and she must feel so helpless and angry. Very nice work capturing her feelings and her innocents. Another wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: As always, thank you so much for the fabulous reviews and support. I'm glad to know I was able to convey Brynna's fear. Just based on the character outline I have for her, I can tell you she's going to be one of my favorite characters because I feel that there's a lot I'm going to be able to do with her in future stories. |
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