Reviews for Dawn of the Dead
| terry |
11/28/05 - 02:04AM |
2: Decisions |
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| Okay, it was just a small exchange. But it was sooo hysterical it really needs to be reviewed. Great scene! |
| redmoon |
09/26/05 - 10:49PM |
2: Decisions |
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Great start. Personally, I have no qualms with short chapters. I don't honestly think I'll get carpel tunnel syndrom from clicking 'next.' Keep updating, this could go anywhere!
Author's Response: I have a feeling it WILL go anywhere. And everywhere. I have something else in the pipeline that's really dark, so this is mostly going to be my little playground o'silliness. Thanks for r&r-ing! |
| axel |
09/26/05 - 04:26PM |
2: Decisions |
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I like the idea of Dawn as a Vampire, and Buffy having to kill her (maybe) My only small complaint, is the chapters are to short, but I'm sure you'll fix that, in time, Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks, but the shortness of the chapters is kind of the idea... to see how much of a story I can tell with just these little snap shots. I think it's going to work better once I've established the story, so to speak, and can just focus on day-to-day stuff... hope you'll keep reading it. |
| jl1980 |
09/26/05 - 03:24PM |
2: Decisions |
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This is really good! I can't wait to see more! I really wanna see what happens to Dawn and how everybody deals with it....please hurry! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, I have about a dozen little chapterettes like these lined up so far... just need to figure out in which order they come in... |
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