Reviews for Ain't destiny's grand?
| Psyche2 |
09/26/05 - 06:17PM |
18: Chapter 18 |
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| Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I need moreeeee! Who's the creature? Ok, I think I can wait patiently but this is to good!! |
| Angel_Forever |
09/25/05 - 01:44PM |
18: Chapter 18 |
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Good! Very very good! Please update soon! Just one thing, I think that Cordelia should go back to the mean bitch. I know she was really bad, but it made it so much interesting. And don't make Xander to much of a jerk.
Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for your review. Nice to hear from you.
Don't worry about Cordelia. I have a plan for her.
Xander gets over it too (just in time) |
| MissEdith |
09/25/05 - 01:39PM |
18: Chapter 18 |
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Very very very very good update. I have just two comments: 1) Buffy said the water was up to her chin, but then she's sitting cross-legged? Shouldn't she be underwater? 2) The water's gotta be coming from somewhere. Has she tried finding that spot? please update soon!
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review. 1) Oops, typo. I meant shin. Just above her ankle. The water's basically coming out in a trickle. Sort of 2) Didn't even think of that. Thanks. |
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