Reviews for The Dream of Us
| jl1980 |
09/27/05 - 10:23AM |
3: Chapter Three |
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I love it! This is a really good story so far! Well-written, and the style of writing is very true to the dialogue and style of the show. Perfect characterization; love how you're showing subtlely yet clearly how Willow is starting to slip into the magic thing...I'll keep reading long as you keep writing :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you feel its true to the show - its so darn difficult to write about characters that have already been so well established. Like, I keep thinking people will read it and be like - Xander wouldn't say that, or Buffy wouldn't do something like that. Oh well, enough ranting! Thanks again for the positive review! |
| MissEdith |
09/26/05 - 06:59PM |
4: Chapter Four |
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Hmm, interesting *strokes chin*. What was Spike doing in Buffy's head? Although, I suppose he could've been in Angel's, which would make marginally more sense....oh well! Update soon!
Author's Response: Good point - I get how that might throw people. I mean, we get why Faith is there, but Spike ... Well, I look at it from the perspective that dreams rarely make sense. That and the fact that the subconscious is off doing its own thing. Obviously at this point, Spike doesn't have the chip in his head, but he has helped Buffy previously, though it was for his own gain since he wanted Angel out of the picture. So I guess its more like a warning going off in Buffy's head, but Willow happened to be the one to see it, and it just happened to take the form of Spike. Sorry this is so long ... but I hope maybe that clarifies it some since I get how that seems weird. Thanks for the input :) |
| Peaches Girl |
09/25/05 - 10:00PM |
1: Chapter One |
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I like this story. I am very A/B pro. I cant wait to see where you go with this. Hope you are able to post again soon. Oh, and good luck with the wedding.
Author's Response: Thank you :) |
| MissEdith |
09/25/05 - 12:31AM |
3: Chapter Three |
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Great update! I can't wait to find out about the story behind the smurf gone wrong. And I can't believe you're updating this and you're about to get married!
Author's Response: Thank you for the input! Writing helps me let off some steam ... and I'm definitely in need of that before the big day :) |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/23/05 - 10:40PM |
2: Chapter Two |
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Argh, suspensefu ending. Yeah, you should definitely keep going with this story. You're off to a great start and the plot's very intriguing. And the fact that it's B/A? Added bonus. :) Update soon, 'cause I'm dying to find out whether or not the spell works, and if it does, then what parts of the dream Willow can and can't see, and her reactions to that. You definitely deserve more results, so here's hoping you get the several dozen you should. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Of course, B/A is always an added bonus to any story :) Gotta love those two ... damn Joss for putting Angel on his own show ... Thanks again!! |
| MissEdith |
09/23/05 - 10:29PM |
2: Chapter Two |
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| I'm with slayerfest. In other words, I'm totally loving this story. It's well-written and true to the characters. And I'm very worried about Willow's plan...Willow and spells of the mind often do not mix. Update soon! |
| slayerfest |
09/23/05 - 09:06PM |
2: Chapter Two |
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I like this a lot so far. It's well-written. I'm kinda addicted, actually. Lovely on all accounts!
[except, there's a gramatical error in the second last paragraph. Wrong your.]
Author's Response: Hope you stay addicted to it :) Oh, and thanks for the edit - if you come across anything else, don't hesitate to let me know. Thanks again! |
| Ksue |
09/23/05 - 07:47PM |
1: Chapter One |
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| Very nice! I definetly like it, good job writing the characters. Are those dreams going to become reality any time soon? Hmmm, anyway, great job. |
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