Reviews for F**K
| breaker |
09/25/05 - 06:47PM |
1: Faith reflects. |
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Wow! Really great stuff!!! I particularly liked the you're nothing like me, then you're nothing. like me. lines - really cool way to make your point. I loved the intensity of it too, it really gets you into her head. Awesome!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! |
| lieselot |
09/23/05 - 01:08PM |
1: Faith reflects. |
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I like some parts, the beginning, the end is good aswell, but I don't like the middle as much, sorry t say, but it's just my oppinion, and for the rest I like it, it does show what faith's probably feeling
Author's Response: Thankyou for you review! I always appreciate feedback whether positive or negative - tho I do have one beef... could you in future please make any criticism constructive - it doesn't help me to improve in future if you're not telling me what it was you didn't like about the middle and how you thought it might have been improved. That aside, thankyou very much for your input. I really do appreciate it!!! |
| nutchick |
09/23/05 - 09:21AM |
1: Faith reflects. |
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i love it. it wonderfully displays faith and what she's probably feeling. wonderful wonderful wonderful.
Author's Response: Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!!! I was really feeling her vibe when I wrote it, and I'm thinking sometime soon down the line I'll have another crack at painting her mind's picture - and maybe try and pick the intensity up another notch! Thanks for the review!! |
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