Reviews for Buffy the vampire slayer : Season 8
| axel |
01/04/06 - 11:59PM |
2: Deadly spirits. |
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Good chapter. I have to agree with the other reveiwer though I think you tried to put in to much, into one plot, and it would have worked better, if it were longer. But it's just a small complaint, Otherwise it was good.
Author's Response: I know it should be longer, I worked on that with my next chapter, that's why from now on, I'm almost every time gonna do it in two chapters, I think it works better that way. |
| JustAGuy |
09/18/05 - 02:58PM |
2: Deadly spirits. |
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Good story, though I think if you increased the length a little bit it would work a lot better as it seems a little compressed. I must agree with the previous review when it said that Faith seemed a little wierd in this series, I'm sorry to say.
Even if, for the first few lines, she seemed her usual sarcastic, spunky self - as she always is, even when she's facing danger or whatever - she seemed to change and didn't really fit. Still, a good idea and it's nice to see you're continuing.
I give it 6.5 out of 10, which I'll have to round up to 7 on the Ratings list.
Author's Response: Thx, i'll try to work on the length more, and i'll work on the Faith thing more to, thx |
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