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Reviews for Buffy the vampire slayer : Season 8




axel 01/04/06 - 11:59PM 2: Deadly spirits. Signed
Good chapter. I have to agree with the other reveiwer though I think you tried to put in to much, into one plot, and it would have worked better, if it were longer. But it's just a small complaint, Otherwise it was good.

Author's Response: I know it should be longer, I worked on that with my next chapter, that's why from now on, I'm almost every time gonna do it in two chapters, I think it works better that way.

axel 01/04/06 - 11:27PM 1: Caithlin Signed
Good work I hope Cahlie get help.

Author's Response: Thanks

i_hate_mornings 09/21/05 - 09:04AM 1: Caithlin Signed
Hey, good start. There are a few mistakes but you explained that at the start so it's cool. Iagree with the others, Faith seemed overly out of character but, were it to happen, she wouldn't be that mellow. I love the idea of the story and i think it has a lot of potential. Keep going.

Author's Response: Thx for the review, and yes, I think you're right about the Faith thing, i'm trying to go somewhere with that character that no one has ever been before, if you keep reading you'll understand. Thx again.

JustAGuy 09/18/05 - 02:58PM 2: Deadly spirits. Signed
Good story, though I think if you increased the length a little bit it would work a lot better as it seems a little compressed. I must agree with the previous review when it said that Faith seemed a little wierd in this series, I'm sorry to say. Even if, for the first few lines, she seemed her usual sarcastic, spunky self - as she always is, even when she's facing danger or whatever - she seemed to change and didn't really fit. Still, a good idea and it's nice to see you're continuing. I give it 6.5 out of 10, which I'll have to round up to 7 on the Ratings list.

Author's Response: Thx, i'll try to work on the length more, and i'll work on the Faith thing more to, thx

little firecracker 09/18/05 - 07:35AM 1: Caithlin Signed
This is a good start, I like the direction in which you're taking the story. the only thing i think stood out was Faith, I don't really see her being as open about her feeling's as you've made her, but other then that it's a good start.

Author's Response: You don't think Faith is as open in the other seasons as she is in my epi. i know that, that's why I wanted to let her say I don't Love... but she still didn't say that he loves him, even tough she cries at the end, that's just a reaction that nobody would expect, that's why i did it, she just couldn't control her emotions at the time I hope that makes any sence

Author's Response: Oh, and I would read the next part of the story too, once it's finished and on the site, a lott of things will become clear to you.
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