Reviews for The Destroyer
| Quortoth |
12/16/05 - 07:37PM |
1: 1.01: The Most Peculiar Boy |
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I'm in suspense ^^, it's scary. Conner dead, dead, dead, Conner. I'm scared. :-P I love how you right so far. [Sorry I Review so much... I just love this, I guess you like it.]
Author's Response: Please don't apologize for reviewing. I LOVE getting reviews. As for Connor, it's not like I'd really kill him. Or would I? Hmmm . . . |
| Quortoth |
12/16/05 - 05:48PM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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I loved that one, “You don’t think I can run metaphorically?” Connor said angrily--- I thought that was great, then Andrew calling Conner, Tango. "Tango's Family" Funny, I love it. Tango, Tango, Tango :-) :-P!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked that linea. I'm awlays afraid my jokes won't work, so I'm glad they got a couple laughs. Thanks for the review. |
| Quortoth |
12/16/05 - 04:44PM |
1: 1.01: The Most Peculiar Boy |
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I think your story has a great fill to it. Wow. I'm so far loving it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I really appreciate your compliments. |
| dutchgirl |
12/08/05 - 07:44AM |
6: 1.06: His Own Brand of Atonement |
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Oh my god!! Connor is dead!? That's just can't be! Right? pretty please ^^!! Poor Connor, first he loses his new family, then Faith reminds Connor of the conditioned love he pretty much had his entire 'real' life, gets 'assaulted' by his cell mate and then to top things off gets visited by the mother of the girl he helped kill, no wonder he went depressed and tried to kill himself, and tried as in not dead ^^!! Did not see 'jail-thing' coming at all!! Altough I can't help but wonder how Angel is going to react to the news of Connor's death!
I liked that you included Andrew in your story because I thought he was a very funny character on the show! Update real soon please, because the suspense is killing me ^^!
Author's Response: Connro was in a pretty suicidal/ nihilistic place emotionally in "Home." IN the begining of this series, that's pretty much where he was again. So all those other things piling onto him left Connor with a desire to end his life. But the story will continue, so . . . I wonder where I'll take it. |
| Angels Shadow |
12/06/05 - 06:17AM |
6: 1.06: His Own Brand of Atonement |
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Wow - intense chapter. I definitely wasn't expecting that ... damn. As always, however, amazing update. This whole story is so well done, and I'm completely hooked. I can't wait to see what happens next, so I hope you can update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I can't wait to get the next update out, but I've been so unmotivated and uncreative lately. Thanks so much for reading. |
| always angel |
12/06/05 - 05:51AM |
6: 1.06: His Own Brand of Atonement |
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Wow, I was expecting that. Great chapter though.
Author's Response: Sorry if I was too predictable with that. but I'm glad you liked the chapter even though you saw the end coming. |
| axel |
12/06/05 - 03:14AM |
6: 1.06: His Own Brand of Atonement |
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Great chapter, The Cash thing was Funny as Hell! By the end, comne on. Your not going to do that, to him, Anymore than I'm going to kill off Faith. (By the way, What was he thinking Fiath was going to sleep with him, and he said NO? That boys nuts!)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I thought the Cash thing could be funny provided my readers have a slightly dark sense of humor. Yay! You're all as sick as I am! Connor gave his reasons for turning down sex with Faith. (At least for now). As for killing Connor, you'll just have to keep reading. You know me well enough to realize I'm not giving anything away here. |
| spideygirl |
12/06/05 - 02:38AM |
6: 1.06: His Own Brand of Atonement |
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OMG, *Jaw Open* are you going to let Connor die, well I hope not. I was wondering why did he do that, why did he cut his wrist?? Was he feeling remorse that he took that innocent girl to be sacrifice?? Anyway, thanks for the update!! More please, I can't wait for the next chapter..
Author's Response: Am I going to let Connor die? Well, you'll have to keep reading. Yeah, you pretty much hit it. Connor was feeling remorse for his part in killing the girl and the mother's visit just reminded him of that. not to mention, he pretty much wanted to die in the season 4 finale, and emotionally, that's where he was again at the beginning of this story. He just kind of didn't want to do it himself. Then, when faced with a fight for his life, he couldn't help but fight to live. Anyway, more wil lbe coming soon. I promise. |
| Vamp19762000 |
12/06/05 - 12:02AM |
6: 1.06: His Own Brand of Atonement |
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Dead? Say it isn't so. Please don't end it like this.
Author's Response: Sorry. You'll have to keep reading. |
| spideygirl |
11/16/05 - 09:14AM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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Yo, I finally read Chapter 5..*sigh* These few days I have been having internet connection problem, so that's why now then I finally finish reading. Anyway, I was shocked the part Connor cut his left wrist for Angel to drink his blood because Angel hasn't eaten for days but weird thing why did he punched Connor before he eat his meal. Good for Eve, her ears got chopped off finally but damned she's getting a new ear. As usual, Connor hates magic and Buffy must be disgusted. So Angel finally told the scooby gang about the memory spell and the best part Andrew comes in hugging Angel. Then Giles was like Andrew, we are angry at Angel so please stop hugging him. It was so hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing that part. So Andrew has been keeping with him all the while so what happen next..next chapter please and thank you.
Author's Response: "He punched Connor" was a typo. It was supposed to be that Connor punched Angel to get him vampy and wanting to eat. I thought the Andrew bit could be funny. Buffy will be possed at Angel for a while, but not for the memory spell. I hope to have the next chapte rup soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| Vamp19762000 |
11/14/05 - 02:18AM |
1: 1.01: The Most Peculiar Boy |
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This story is geting even more interesting please keep going. I'm hoping for a lot more Connor.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. There will be a lot more Connor than I had in this chapter, but there'll always be a balance between Connor and various people looking for him. I hope you keep reading and enjoying the story. Thanks again. |
| always angel |
11/11/05 - 12:51AM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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Willow telling Angel that memory spells are bad was great! Like she hasn't done a few in her day. This story is great. Update soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the WIllow/ memory spell irony. Hope you keep reading. Thanks so much for the review. |
| axel |
11/10/05 - 06:23PM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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"I can run metaphoricaly! I don't no what that means, but I can do it!" HA! Funny. Did I read Willow tell Angel memory spells where bad (like say, making your girlfriend forget a fight?) Great chapter. Maybe next chapter Connor can kill Andrew (did I just say that?)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad the irony of Willow complaining about memory spells wasn't lost on anyone. I thought it was a nice touch. As for Connor killing Andrew . . . hmmm. I need to go write. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/10/05 - 05:44PM |
5: 1.05: Pursuit |
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Again, I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. You've written the characters so well, and Andrew's appearance there at the end was amusing. Everyone is reacting to the situation true to form and I feel like I might be reading a script right off of Buffy or Angel because you've done a phenomenal job at the characterizations. I really do love this story, and I hope there will be an update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope to u[date again soon as well. I also hope you keep reading and enjoying the story. I have a lot ot get through next chapter, so I'm not sure how long it will take to write it or how long the chapter willbe. Hopefully, it won't be too, too long. Thanks again. |
| dutchgirl |
11/06/05 - 10:34AM |
4: 1.04: Escape |
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This is awesome!! I like it very much so far. If I had been the senior partners I also would have taken connor's memories back as payback to angel. The arena fighting and ear-tropy taking alouds you beter inside in connor's life in hell as the destroyer. The show always made me wonder why the demons of the darkest hell dimension feared him so. Since on the show they seemed to suggest that in a ‘fair’ fight he could not win from angel and faith (although in those fights connor was always pretty emotionally troubled/confused). So I kind of thougt that the demons there had to be animal-like, instinct driven, so he could out-smart them.The tropy taking was to install fear and reputation and that he is at his deadliest when he had his emotions incheck. I also like your idea that connor can take alott of pain, makes sense! I'm happy you let connor escape on his own, that he can take care of himself!! (of course he might not make it...have to wait for the next chapter to find out!!) Congratz with your award for campus life!! And last but not least: Hooray Angel is still alive!! Wonder if he already knows that they have taken connor’s happy memories away!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I plan on doing seventeen more chapters, so hopefully you’ll be able to stick it out. I’m pretty much in line with your assessment that whenever thinking or emotion enters into it, Connor has trouble. I’m hoping to go on and deal with more of his emotional issues, of which there are many. Let's face it; if the kid were well adjusted, this wouldn't be as much fun. Thanks for the congrats on "Campus Life." |
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