Reviews for Crackpot
| Kevin |
05/15/06 - 06:51PM |
3: Banter |
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Awesome start. The first three chapters are really cool. I wonder if the whole story will be built around people thiking WIll is a crackpot. Like, what if someone finds his note and has him locked away? Also, is Will related to Willow? Like maybe her kid? I'll have to read on. COll start!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much. I do appreciate reviews out of the blue. |
| filmtheory |
05/08/06 - 05:45PM |
12: Epilogue |
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Nice ending. I wonder what become of Dru. Very cool story.
Author's Response: I started a sequel and then it sort of petered away. Maybe I'll start it up again sometime. Thanks again for the multiple reviews out of the blue. |
| filmtheory |
05/08/06 - 05:36PM |
10: Associations |
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I like how you keep throwing in the home drama for both With and Leanne. Leanne is pretty well adjusted for someone in her situation. And damn! I totally missed who Will was! Interesting twist with the mother and Dru.
Author's Response: Hahaha. I had to completely re-read the story to figure out what you were talking about. It's strange how you just completely forget what you've written after a while. I'm glad the plot twists are appreciated; sometimes I wonder if they're a bit confusing. Thanks for the input. |
| filmtheory |
05/08/06 - 05:19PM |
5: Pointer |
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Great story. Very imaginative. I’ve seen (and really enjoyed) quite a few fics set in the future. But this is one of the best as far as sci-fi/ futuristic technology. I LOVE the whiteboard. I also love Dru. I’m so glad you worked her into the mythology. I’m now about 95% sure I know who Will is. I just had his situation wrong.
Author's Response: Ahahaha. Will caught everyone by surprise. I was baffled at how many people thought he was Spike. I really didn't intend to write him that way. Thanks for commenting, really really. |
| filmtheory |
05/01/06 - 06:26PM |
2: Literature |
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This is a really cool story. I just read the first two chapters. I like the flashback to Buffy’s exploits in Leanne’s dream. The “unpeppy” line was hysterical. I have to e-mail you with a suspicion I have about Will. Although I don’t know that Will was so smart to introduce himself to his slayer via note, the move with the Trig book was pretty smooth. I’ll have to keep reading this. By the way, the author “axel” has a challenge out for stories about slayers other than ones we’ve seen on the show. You may want to get this story added to his index.
Author's Response: I did actually notice Axel's challenge... I think I offered to have my story put in or something. Thank you ever so much for the review; I didn't notice it for the longest time. :) |
| lieselot |
10/07/05 - 04:41PM |
12: Epilogue |
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I agree too, I liked this story a lott, and I don't care how you do it, bur please! Make a sequel
Author's Response: Sequel, sequel. Maybe. We'll see how strapped I am for ideas. Thanks again for all your lovely comments, they made my day. |
| lieselot |
10/07/05 - 04:38PM |
11: Fate |
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it's cool, it's good
Author's Response: Thank you! |
| littlewiccan |
09/26/05 - 06:18PM |
12: Epilogue |
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I agree with the aprupt ending part but I suppose all good things must come to an end. Good job!
Author's Response: I wanted to wrap it up, I think. I may make a sequel just to make things a little more gradual, but for now I'm much too lazy. Thanks for commenting!
Author's Response: Oh, but I meant to leave the Drusilla thing open to be interpreted as however. Maybe I will write a sequel. Whahahaha. |
| Timan |
09/26/05 - 05:52PM |
12: Epilogue |
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I really loved this story. the only comment I have is that I felt that it ended a little abruptly. I would really love to see this story continue
Author's Response: Really? Thank you! You seem to be agreed with, so maybe I'll create a sequel at some point. I ended it because the story line was running itself into the ground. |
| nutchick |
09/25/05 - 07:29PM |
12: Epilogue |
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i liked it a lot. good job.
Author's Response: Thank you! |
| lieselot |
09/25/05 - 03:26AM |
10: Associations |
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it's better, good job
Author's Response: Thanks, love. |
| lieselot |
09/23/05 - 01:54PM |
10: Associations |
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Well, like Leanne said, it was a very confusing reunion, nice, but very very confusing, it's hard to get it, but i do, maybe others won't, i don't know, it's nice, but confusing
Author's Response: Yep. I'm pleased I changed it. It's still kind of confusing but not as much, and it's loads shorter too, so it doesn't drag anymore. Hopefully. Thanks for pointing that out! |
| lieselot |
09/23/05 - 01:46PM |
9: Explaination, Part II |
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Nice, nice, we finally now the story, so sad that buffy's dead, and xander, oh, and kennedy and poor willow, nice story, nice, I like to say nice allot hu ? ;-)
Author's Response: Ah, nice is a very... nice word. ; ) Thanks for commenting, as always. |
| lieselot |
09/23/05 - 01:17PM |
8: Flashback |
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I like it, you played Dru's character very well, her crazy ness and stuff, it's just like the dru out of the show, good job
Author's Response: Whahaha. I am SO being Drusilla for Hallowe'en. |
| littlewiccan |
09/21/05 - 03:22PM |
1: Encounter |
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Hey totally confused and shocked the whole thing w/ the blood definelty made me think it was Spike. So kudos on the suprising twist.....alot of times I figure them out and they're not well.....suprising.
P.S. I want to know who the mom is too and what happened to the rest of the scoobies.
Author's Response: Good! I'm glad the story holds an element of surprise. Thanks for commenting. |
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