Reviews for Hero
| BelovedSlayer |
10/01/05 - 07:31PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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| i so love the last few chappies!! its so interesting that Buffy's mom was a superhero as well. i dont think alot of people had done that plot so far. this fic is turning out to be really really great!! please update ASAP if u get the chance!! |
| lessthanangelic1 |
09/12/05 - 10:02PM |
6: Chapter 6 |
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| its interesting...i like how everyone is human, yet they still all have their same roles- it's kinda cool |
| MissEdith |
09/12/05 - 07:08PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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Bad Angel! She just found out and she was going to tell you! My one criticism though is that Buffy accepted her lot awfully easily. Adrenaline rush explains the first reaction, but I'd think that later on it would sink in...or maybe that's still to come...whatever...
Author's Response: Shhh! You're jumping the gun. Yes, the reality of the situation is still to come. Buffy is still in the honeymoon period. Have you ever thought about what it would be like to be told you were a super hero? I think that I would be stoked until I realized that being a superhero didn't make me immortal. That my life was on the line. Be patient, all of this will come in the next chapter. Thanks for your review! |
| MissEdith |
09/11/05 - 07:40PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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| ok, that explanation makes sense. update soon! |
| BelovedSlayer |
09/09/05 - 10:59PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| this fic is just getting better and better and i am so looking forward to buffy's first encounter in the graveyard. it should be really exciting. can't wait and keep up the good work. and update ASAP |
| MissEdith |
09/09/05 - 03:35PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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Hmm, this story has great potential! My one comment is about the summary: you called it a terrorist attack, but Benny's attack isn't really terrorism because he wasn't attempting to coerce a government or society. At least, it didn't seem like he was....
Author's Response: Yes, that's true, it's not really a terrorist attack, but I couldn't think of te right word. I didn't want to take the time to say psycho student killer, so I said terrorist. But, I'm glad that you like it. |
| BelovedSlayer |
09/07/05 - 02:55PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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wow the chappie is really even better than the first one!! bravo!! its pretty scary that Buffy had to be put in that dangerous situation but she turned out to be a hero!! yay!! lol. and the ending where that man dressed in tweed watched her dance with Angel, something tells me there's more suprising things coming Buffy's way. great job on this fic and oh by the way, its great working with you too!!! update soon!!
Author's Response: You're right, there are definetly more surprises coming Buffy's way. And she thinks that the drama is over. Mwa-haha. Nope, drama is just begining. Give you one guess who tweed man is. I'll update as soon as I have time. |
| always angel |
09/06/05 - 11:33PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| Wow, great storyline. The first chapter was really well written and included a lot of vivids. I like it a lot and can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Timan |
09/06/05 - 11:20PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| wow. that was a great build up. i liked the way you describe the scenes it helped get a clearer image of what's going on |
| BelovedSlayer |
09/06/05 - 10:38PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Wow. this is a pretty intense fic that mixes with whats going on in real life and all of it. but anyways, its really good so far especially reading about the guy who is a loner that starts shooting people. good job and update really soon!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the part about Benny, the creepy loner guy. Hope you continue to like it. |
| punk |
09/06/05 - 10:18PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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First off, you really do have a terrific talent as a writer. You're descriptions are vivid and the character dialogue rings true. The storyline you've chosen is not an easy one that's for sure. It will really depend on how its handled as to whether it will come off... I do like the idea of the real world issues crashing into the world of fantasy - and I will await the next installment with more than a little trepidation. In short - Great writing... fine line. Looking forward to seeing how you walk it.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for those lovely comments. I really appreciate you taking the imte to write a response like that. Hopefully the story will live up to your expectations. |
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