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punk 09/06/05 - 10:08PM 4: In a corner Signed
Nice construction of the figth scene - nothing better than a perspective change or a sharp cut to keep you reading!! I also really enjoyed the conflict between her new role and her life role - "If anyone were to see her, her families remaining shreds of dignity would be in shambles." That line alone not only tells you about her conflict, but also her families position in the society - great storytelling. Keep up the excellent work!!

Author's Response: Thank you kind sir! I really wanted to play up her conflict with herself and her role in society (and in her family) I did this mainly because I am about to throw a few more hurdles at her to jump over, and those new conflicts will be playing a huge role. I am about to throw a curveball into this story, I just hope you guys don't think it is too cliche, or uninventive, because that is just how Elizabeth thinks the story should go. I am but a pawn to her character, and shall go where she leads me. I hope you guys are enjoying the story, and continue to enjoy it when I turn the world upside down! Thanks for the review! -Marissa

axel 09/06/05 - 09:45PM 4: In a corner Signed
Great fight sence, maybe one day you'll write a movie that even Matt Damon can't screw up (sorry, I saw that sucky movie yesterday, and I'm still pissed, I'll shut up.) Keep it up.

Author's Response: I had my worries about the fight scene, I am glad someone is enjoying it! I'm not the best at fight scenes (if you notice, I try and keep them to a minimum in all my stories, focusing more on internal action) Sorry you didn't like the movie, I normally like Matt Damon, but have not seen Brothers Grimm yet. I loved their story collection, so I'm excited about seeing it as a movie-though most movies based on books never do the books justice. Thanks! -Marissa
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