Reviews for The Generations
| punk |
09/07/05 - 07:51PM |
3: Stitch |
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The one you opened the chapter with... the stitch in the quilt!!! I thought it was a nice way to tie the slayer line together!!!!
Author's Response: Oh! (duh Marissa) I t hought you were talking about a different chapter. And thanks! I had all of the chapter titles picked out when I started the story, to help me know what to discuss. I wanted to use that analogy to show Elizabeth's place in the Slayer lineage, and help establish a connection with her past Slayer sisters. Thanks again! -Marissa |
| punk |
09/06/05 - 10:02PM |
3: Stitch |
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Oh, and I forgot to mention - sweet analogy!!!
Author's Response: Which analogy? -Marissa |
| punk |
09/06/05 - 10:01PM |
3: Stitch |
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Excellent stuff - It's building and coming along very nicely... I like the occassional references to the period - spice, coin bag (etc) - and particularly enjoyed the Watcher's urge to comfort her... you can feel the potential!! (No pun intended)
Author's Response: (laughs insanely) I'm glad you are enjoying it and think it is progressing well. I have a passion for history, especially the European Middle Ages, so I try and make refrences when I think they are suitable. And I'm glad you are "feeling the potential" I will go ahead and tell you that something is going to happen between them, and there is about to be a big plot twist a few chapters down the line. Thanks for reading! -Marissa |
| axel |
09/06/05 - 09:36PM |
3: Stitch |
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Really liking it so far, I really is'nt fair that one girl has to be the only Slayer (why is it always a girl anyway, I mean it's kind of sexies, don't you think, if it was always a guy, that wouldn't be right, would it? Shut up Axel). Anyway, the period works well to, it's already better that the movie "The Brothers Grimm" (did I just say that, Damn Matt Damon). Keep it up.
Author's Response: I want to see that movie so bad! Okay...now to the actual response to your review! Thank you for the compliments, and I am glad you are enjoying it, I enjoy writing it. I am excited about character development and story progression, I have a lot in store for our Middle Ages Slayer, I hope you guys are shocked when the actual "reveal" is revealed! Thanks again! -Marissa |
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