Reviews for Growing up Sunnydale style WIP
| Shay |
09/07/05 - 03:32PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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| Remind me not to eat chocolate pudding while reading your fan fiction anymore! Ick...anyway, it was a really cute chapter, you just have to smile when Anya is talking! And yes, I think Buffy would absolutly die if she read Dawn's diary! I love the building suspense to Dawn's birthday, I wonder how Spike will react to Dawn's rose and jasmine scented advances?! Post more soon! -Marissa |
| terry |
09/07/05 - 11:51AM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Cool story. It definitely has the feel of a journal from a burgeoning woman’s POV. It always bothered me on the show how Buffy got treated as a mature adult at 16, but Dawn was still a little girl in the show’s eyes. I like the idea of this story and can’t wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Thanks I agree totally,when I was 16 I had already left home had my own flat,and was self sufficiant .maybe if they hadn't treated dawn like a child she wouldn't have been so bratty most of the time, Again thanks, Boo : ) |
| spikes girl |
09/07/05 - 06:27AM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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hey great chapter, i have to agree with dawn, buffy would just die if she read this diary!!!
You gotta love anya, she just brings her own specialness to the mix! meanwhile i wann hear more about Xander in a dress... ;)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it,I don't know if I'll elaborate on Xander in a dress.I may write an entire new story about the exploits of Xander and Anya.
Boo ; ) |
| spikes girl |
09/05/05 - 11:27PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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hey great story so far, i can't wait to see how the plan goes, personally i'm rooting for her (no pun intended). can't wait for the rest of it, by the way, "boo boo kitty foo " -cute name
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing if it's any help Dawn gets what she deserves or does she............ Boo ; ) |
| Shay |
09/05/05 - 07:06PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Very interesting, I liked the shopping scene. I can't wait to see what Dawn is up to next! Post more soon! -Marissa
Author's Response: Honest I will do more soon.
Boo : ) |
| Shay |
09/04/05 - 05:42PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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Very cute and true to a teenagers life! I like the diary entry format, seeing as Dawn is a big diary writer! I hope you write some more on this soon, I want to see what she writes next! Shopping spree? Intriguing! Keep it up, write more soon! -Marissa
Author's Response: Thanks Marissa I will post some more soon. Boo x :D |
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