Reviews for New Girls
| littlewiccan |
12/05/05 - 06:36PM |
16: Sorry |
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Don't be discourged it was just contructieve critsism and I know no one in any way meant to deter you from continuing, which I think you should defiently do. Don't give up, just take the critisism into consderation, change somthing if you think need be or do a re-write if you feel its necesarry but don't give up.
Author's Response: Oh no! Don't get me wrong I'm good with constructive critisism I just re-read the fic and saw I should have ended it before the 2 chapter sI deleted. I was just trying to make the story go on when it didn't really need to. I don't mind when people say what they're really thinking and not just say oh the fic is great keep it up! Not that that is a bad thing it's just I really don't know where I was going with the whole Buffy moving out thing. I had a plan it's long forgotten. Thanks for the encougament! |
| BelovedSlayer |
12/05/05 - 05:38PM |
16: Sorry |
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hey. that's ok for the mistake. it happens. besides that though, i really really enjoyed this awesome fic and im looking forward to see where its going. great work Angel Forever and please don't get discouraged with that stupid writer's block!!
Author's Response: Thanks. The end good night. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/25/05 - 01:30PM |
1: New Girls |
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| Hey Angel Forever. how it's going? i totally love your fic but i gotta say that you haven't updated in such a loong while!! you must please please update this fic as soon as possible cuz i love it lots!!! update soon!! |
| littlewiccan |
11/13/05 - 08:41AM |
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| can't wait to see what happens next update soon! |
| littlewiccan |
09/15/05 - 05:29PM |
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| I agree Joyce totally overreacted, all the same I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh and I get that this is an Angel/Buffy story and that's totally cool but can you please give Spike a girlfriend I feel bad for him cuz he's the only memeber in the group who dosen't have someone to love. |
| Ksue |
09/14/05 - 08:12PM |
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| Whoa. Kinda harsh reaction, on both sides, don't ya think? Don't get me wrong, it was a great chapter, but it's not like Buffy and Angel are getting married. Young people say that they love each other all the time, but it doesn't mean they're throwing away their lives. Joyce was kind of unfairly harsh. Anyway, great job and update soon! |
| frenchtoast101 |
09/08/05 - 06:19AM |
12: Plan B |
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| haha...the first tonsil removal by tongue...that's great. I love this! |
| BelovedSlayer |
09/07/05 - 10:29PM |
15: Reality is Better Then Fiction |
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| the last two chappies are great and i gotta say this your lyrics sounded good and really catchy. good job and i never imagine that ugly bastard riley would turn out to be a crazed. but im glad you made him like that so his sorry ass can go back to the mental place lol!! he's such a piece of crap. and keep up the good work and dont forget to update ASAP!! |
| littlewiccan |
09/06/05 - 07:28PM |
14: The SpellCasters |
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| intresting..I like the concept so far. |
| Ksue |
09/06/05 - 02:43PM |
14: The SpellCasters |
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| Nice! Riley is one freaky dude. |
| BelovedSlayer |
09/05/05 - 09:53PM |
13: Straight Up |
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| you know i was hoping spike and angel wont have to fight over Buffy and it looks like theyre gonna be more nicer to each other which i like cuz for some reason i dont wanna see a love triangle brewing...reminds me too much of jerry springer lol!!! you are doing a very great job on this so please please update ASAP!!! |
| Ksue |
09/05/05 - 04:15PM |
11: Spike's Plan |
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Ah! I love it! I seriously can't believe that this is your first fic. You write better than some people who've written a million fics. Keep up the good work, I hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea how much it means to me that people like it this much. |
| BelovedSlayer |
09/05/05 - 03:42PM |
11: Spike's Plan |
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| oo im so not liking what Spike is doing. i mean hello, why make Buffy jealous if he could get another pretty girl and im saying that cuz i love buffy and angel together lol. so far, your fic is doing really well and im hoping with all the encouraging reviews, you can still continue it cuz its turning out to be one of my faves!! please update ASAP!! |
| frenchtoast101 |
09/04/05 - 07:48PM |
9: To Close for Comfort |
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Yuck, Riley's such a creep. Same with Principal Wood....'cept I kinda liked him in the show, but not in this story cuz hes a weirdo....lol. I'm soo glad you updated!! Now, do it again! I'm dying to know what Buffy's worst fear is!
Author's Response: i'm glad! I made Wood like that because I think it would have been better in the show if he'd still kept trying to get at Buffy after they're first date. Believe me you'll be surprised. |
| BelovedSlayer |
09/04/05 - 03:33PM |
1: New Girls |
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o im loving this fic!! is this actually your first one?? anyways, if it is, i have to tell you you're doing a great job on this one!! keep up the good work!! im gonna add this to my fave sections. So please please update ASAP!!
Author's Response: Really? Yes it is! I'm really surprised I thought everyone would think it sucked! |
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