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punk 08/30/05 - 10:19PM 2: Slayer Lore Signed
I really enjoyed this chapter - it felt like a really well paced character exercise. The thing that struck me most is that you knew that you were dealing with characters we've never met before, and that you have taken the opportunity in this chapter to not be bound to the idea of having to make each chapter filled with action. You have taken a far more mature approach in building the characters and their feelings about each other without them even having met - and that is excellent writing. In case you haven't noticed, I was really impressed by the maturity of the piece. Oh yeah, and great descriptions too!!! One last thing - don't stress about the chapter size, I know it's my personal taste, but I enjoy chapters about that length - gives just enough to keep me waiting for the next post!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was very fun to write. I'm also glad you don't mind the "not action packed" part, because the next few chapters will deal a lot with the history of the characters, and help set the scene for the rest of the story. Thanks for the maturity comments. I'm glad that you think my characters are developing well, that is great praise! I'm really letting the time period and new characters take over the writing (I know it sounds odd, but that is where the language and descriptions come from!) And thank you for the confidence boost, I was worried about the chapter lengths, I'm glad you don't mind them! Thanks again, it is really helpful to me, and gets me ready to write the next chapter! -Marissa
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