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Shay 08/30/05 - 07:53PM 7: midnight visit Signed
I liked the story plot. I normally don't like AU fiction where it's all human, but this was good. I noticed some sentence structure problems, as well as a few grammatical errors. On the whole it was good in mechanics. I wouldn't mind beta-ing for you if you want a beta, I'm a big English buff, (or so I'd like to believe!). Again, good job, add more soon! -Marissa

Author's Response: i don't know what a beta-reader is but if you e-mail me and tell me that would be cool. thank you for the review!! and please keep reading. nutchick@hotmail.com






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