Reviews for seeking comfort
| Fighter78 |
12/29/05 - 11:43PM |
13: shopping |
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I really like it so far, update soon. 8)
Author's Response: mmmmkay. |
| axel |
12/19/05 - 09:02PM |
2: unconvincing |
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Poor Buffy. Maybe Spike can kick Hank's ass. Good work.
Author's Response: keep watching!!! well no reading, yes, keep reading.!! |
| littlewiccan |
12/06/05 - 01:40PM |
12: uncomfy |
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| hmmm.....intresting. Wonder what will happen next. |
| littlewiccan |
11/13/05 - 01:32PM |
11: ice-cream |
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Nice chappie. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: coolbeanie beans, i'll update soon.!!!! nice to know someone is still there. you are awsome! |
| littlewiccan |
10/28/05 - 01:58PM |
10: welcome home!! |
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I like this chapter. Hope to see lots of spuffy smoochies to come! lol! I'm in a good mood today in case you can't tell! Oh and have a Happy Halloween!
Author's Response: alright Spufyy it is. happy halloween to you too!!!! and here goes nothing. |
| littlewiccan |
09/15/05 - 05:39PM |
9: time to prepare. |
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hmmm....I love the way you potrayed Willow- nice and sweet-just the way she should be. I took driving lessons this summer, as well as my road test (I passed-yay!) so I know what you're going through too. Switching lanes on the highway is so scary-lol.
Author's Response: willow has to be sweet. that's just the wills that i love. |
| MissEdith |
09/12/05 - 07:14PM |
9: time to prepare. |
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yay, updates make me happy...good chapter...buffy's awfully cheerful for someone who's been hospitalized by her dad! and did something happen to joyce? as in, did hank kill her and make it look like she took off? i totally feel your pain as i am very familiar with writer's block. that and i took drivers ed a few months ago (so boring!).
Author's Response: today i merged with traffic! scared the hell outtame but tis all good. Buffy see's where her life may lead from the points being revealed. she pushed away the memories from hank. and joyce up and left in chapter 8. keep reading.!!!!!! |
| MissEdith |
09/07/05 - 05:19PM |
8: confessions/alone/finding someplace new |
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This is really good so far, update soon.
Author's Response: waahhhh. i'm stuck.. if you have any idea's please email me at nutchick@hotmail.com
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| littlewiccan |
08/31/05 - 06:50PM |
3: here to help |
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hmm intresting spike lives alone wonder what gonna happen next
Author's Response: you'll find out soon. |
| Shay |
08/30/05 - 07:53PM |
7: midnight visit |
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I liked the story plot. I normally don't like AU fiction where it's all human, but this was good. I noticed some sentence structure problems, as well as a few grammatical errors. On the whole it was good in mechanics. I wouldn't mind beta-ing for you if you want a beta, I'm a big English buff, (or so I'd like to believe!). Again, good job, add more soon! -Marissa
Author's Response: i don't know what a beta-reader is but if you e-mail me and tell me that would be cool. thank you for the review!! and please keep reading.
nutchick@hotmail.com |
| MissEdith |
08/30/05 - 03:28PM |
1: the lies |
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this is an interesting story so far, (the child abuse premise isn't shockingly original, but oh well). u should definitely write more.
Author's Response: thank you!!! i know it's not terribly origional but since it was my first i decided to stick with something i knew a lot about. thanks sooo much for reviewing. i'm glad you like it so far! |
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