Reviews for Fallen
| michebabyblue |
01/29/06 - 06:10PM |
1: **Chosen** |
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Loved this story got me all tingally, u r an awsome writer.
Author's Response: aww thank you soo much. you have no idea what those awesome comments mean to me:) im soo happy you like the fic and i will definitely return the favor when i get the chance to finish reading your awesome fic as well:) thank you!!! |
| Sinister |
12/31/05 - 11:48PM |
3: **Dark Fantasy** |
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Wow...Angel really is an evil little basterd isn't he? lol. Nice work!
Author's Response: Hey thanx for the review Sinister. i'm really glad you like the fic so far. sorry if i didn't answered your review. i had too many computer problems so i had to stay off for a while. the fic is gonna be a bit rushed because i only wanted to write it for enterntainment and to pass the time as well. thanx for the great review!!! |
| Sinister |
12/31/05 - 11:46PM |
2: **Fallen** |
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| Cool powers! This should be good. Great job! |
| Sinister |
12/31/05 - 11:44PM |
1: **Chosen** |
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| This looks interesting. Buffy and Angel swarn enamies...that wont last. Those two are ment for each other =) |
| Shay |
08/31/05 - 05:59PM |
15: **Befallen Angel** |
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I liked this story, and my only qualm with it, is that the whole story felt very rushed. I hoped it would even out and flow more, but it never really did. I don't mind the short chapters (read my newest fic, and you'll understand why!) but the plot seemed really rushed. I would have liked to see more emotional connection from the reader to the character, I felt very detached from the characters, and just wish things wouldn't have went so quickly. I really enjoyed the story idea though, and thought you did a good job. -Marissa
Author's Response: your right about the rushing thing. as soon as i erased kissing me darkly i just went to work right away on this one. so yea its a bit rush but this is only a sort of enjoyment fic after cuz i erased the other one. but in the next few dyas, im gonna be working on the other one. so thank you for your opinion and stuff. thanx!1 |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
08/31/05 - 04:54PM |
15: **Befallen Angel** |
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Aww...what a sweet ending. Seemed kinda rushed though. I still liked it.
Author's Response: see im telling you i didn't really killed angel off and i never will in any of my fics. yea it kinda seems rushed but i wanted to post the last two chappies before i work on my next fic and all. but im glad you like it and in the next fews days im gonna be working on the next fic. thanx!! |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
08/31/05 - 04:51PM |
14: **Last Chance** |
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| WHAT?!? First Ange lnow Buffy?! GAH!!! |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
08/31/05 - 04:51PM |
13: **Face Of An Angel** |
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| Language Buffy! She's so pure but, then she's not. That's kinda wow to me. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, family was in town and I wasn't allowed on the computer. Hope to see an update soon. |
| always angel |
08/31/05 - 12:03AM |
13: **Face Of An Angel** |
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So is she dead yet?
Author's Response: lol no not yet. but she will be i promise. today im posting the last two chappies cuz im gonna work on another fic after this. |
| Shay |
08/30/05 - 08:01PM |
13: **Face Of An Angel** |
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I'm enjoying this story, but have one small problem. It is again, about cursing. In my mind I am seeing Buffy in this story as pure and innocent, but her cursing really causes that to become watered down, and I see her as more of a good person with evil qualities. You know? Other than that, and a few grammatical mistakes it's good! Keep it up! -Marissa
Author's Response: ok i get ya. she's pure and all but i dont wanna make her become too much of a goodie goody and all but i will try to keep the bad cussing down just a tad bit. im gonna be posting the last two fics tomorrow and then im working on doing a fic that is partly based on the A list books by zoey dean if you ever heard of her. Thanks a bunch and like always, i appreciate your comments. and they will be little grammar mistakes in the last chappies. thanx!! |
| always angel |
08/29/05 - 11:51PM |
12: **Fallen Grace** |
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You Killed him! I can't believe you killed him! I really have no room to talk because I've killed Angel in my new story but still...I can't believe you killed him!
Author's Response: Hey hey lol dont hyperventilate on me lol!! i killed him but i didn't kill him off from the fic entirely. Buffy just thinks he's really dead thats all im gonna say for now until i post the next two chappies tomorrow. like angelsbabigurl, you two just trust me on this one. I would NEVER EVER kill off angelus im a b/a fan you know i would never do a crazy thing like that in any of my fics unless he's really alive and stuff. Just have faith in me and youll see what happens lol... |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
08/29/05 - 07:18PM |
12: **Fallen Grace** |
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omg...YOU KILLED HIM!!!! NO ONE EVER KILLS ANGEL OR ANGELUS BESIDES JOSS!!!! IT'S NOT ALLOWED!!!!!! YOU BETTER UPDATE RIGHT THE HELL NOW OR I WILL.....SOMETHING BUT DO IT!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Calm down. I didn't killed him off the whole fic just yet. I wont reveal anything as of yet til i put in another chappie, but its very very possible that angelus will be back in the fic in a couple of chappies or so. You know im not crazy to kill off Angelus, thats crazy talk considering im a b/a fan all the way. you just gotta have faith and trust in me and then you'll see if he shows up in the next chappie. trust me |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
08/29/05 - 04:59PM |
11: ** Night Falls** |
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NO! You can't kill him! It's not right! I'm gonna cry....
Author's Response: its not right i agree. i dont wanna give anything away, but its very possible that he could come back within the next chappies. you have to stay tuned to find out and yes of course i will update lol!! |
| Shay |
08/29/05 - 04:20PM |
12: **Fallen Grace** |
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*coughcough* YOU KILLED HIM! I was on the verge of tears! I can only hope that his (and I use this term loosely) 'mother' will pay dearly for his death! And there can be curveballs...he could come back..right? Good chapter, update soon! -Marissa
Author's Response: yea its very possible that he could come back you never know. I will update very soon. who knows he can come back you never know you just gotta wait and see what happens next hee hee... |
| Shay |
08/28/05 - 01:43PM |
11: ** Night Falls** |
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No! You can't kill Angel! Maybe just a little flesh wound, you know...no big deal? But please do kill his evil mother, she is really getting on my nerves! I hope there is a happy ending for Buffy and Angel...this story is really good, at times sweet, and at others scary. Keep it up! I can't wait to see what's going to happen! -Marissa
Author's Response: Lol don't worry angel's mother will be gone soon enough, good riddence lol. and you have to wait to see what happens next when i post another chappie. and thanx it means alot to hear your great comments about the fic and i hope you can update your newest fic as well which i reviewed yesterday.
Will update by tomorrow. thank you!! |
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