Reviews for Unmask
| redmoon |
01/10/06 - 11:57AM |
10: Betrayal. |
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So Dawn's in a coma and Buffy has an evil twin... Where's Batman when you need him? Loving the development - I hope the R.S.M. doesn't try to smother D in her sleep with a pillow! Update soon!
Author's Response: Batman's dead! The mob killed him first! speaking of the Mob, the next chapter will focus exculsivly on them. SInce they've been faceless killer, up to now, I though we should learn more about them. Thanks for reading. |
| twinblade |
01/10/06 - 07:00AM |
10: Betrayal. |
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My opinion is it's Glory. Or Anne, or possibly even... no even you wouldn't be that evil.
Author's Response: Maybe. But then that means Buffy didn't do it. Which mena's she really saw the leader. So why wouldn't she reconise them? (And don't forget, she was hugging Sara. What's that about?) Thanks for reading. And yes, I am that evil, HA HA HA! |
| dust2dust |
01/09/06 - 07:38PM |
1: Pray for mercy |
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oh wow!! update very very soon. 2 thumbs up. the suspense is killing me.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll answer some question (and make new ones) soon. |
| redmoon |
01/01/06 - 11:25AM |
9: Reunion, part 2. |
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Ohh, you're vicious: How many times can I say it? Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. Vicious. That's, like, ten, I think. You're decavicious. To be fair, though, this could be the mother of all misunderstandings in which case you're only, say, octavicious. Don't make me come after your head!
Author's Response: HEY, this is your fault! Your the one that said I hadn't made Buffy look guilty (I'm kidding). I do like to F*#k with people though. Hopefuly I can keep people guessing. Thanks for reading. |
| redmoon |
12/07/05 - 10:20PM |
8: Reunion. |
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Hmm... is Buffy evil... Well, I know I'm prone to evil and sadistic tendencies and I know for a fact that you're evil... but Buffy? Well, let's assume that the Oz baddie and the person Faith and Jason were talking to was the real baddie. Now if Oz isn't really dead --- and if he is, then you're a great deal more evil than I thought--- then this new baddie can appear as people who are still alive: including our beloved Slayer. Also: if Buffy is leading this gang and this gang really hates each and every one of the Scoobies so much... I suppose Buffy could have killed them when they walked in the door... So I say no. She's not evil. She's too quirky to be evil. (Not to say that your evil eminence isn't also quirky...) By the way, no love lost for Righteous Slayer Mob. I'm still your biggest fan. (FYI, if you don't update, I may be forced to wear your head as a hat) lol.
Author's Response: Yeah just try to take my head. You'll find out how evil I can be (evil grin). The Oz thing. That came from the first challge I did on Gumboyd page. He said be brutal, so I killed Oz. and implied that Buffy would go evil. only meaning it to be a one shot deal. But I couldn't get the idea out of my head, thus this. Is Oz really dead? Did he kill himself? IS Jason evil? Is Faith evil? All I have to say is.....................
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Author's Response: By the way, you said Buffy could have kill them, as soon as they walked in, but Willow, Faith, and Kennedy were there(the last to just didn't say anything) and Buffy was alone, so it might behove her not to try to kill them. Just a thought. |
| Timan |
11/14/05 - 02:04AM |
7: The War Begins. |
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"And I was hit by something. And then Santa Claus, was singing We will rock you. I think I may be a little loopy" haha i love that line. this chapter is great i love how the tension is building in the group. good job
Author's Response: Yes Willow says funny things, when her brain gets all mushed. The theme for this story is, who can you trust, so the tension's not going away. Thanks. |
| redmoon |
10/11/05 - 06:30PM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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You have a vicious (in the best sense of the word) knack for cliff-hangers. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, I try. |
| spikes girl |
10/10/05 - 07:00AM |
1: Pray for mercy |
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| i just re read the review i left and obviously i meant to say "u pulled it off" instead, sorry it should read better now
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| spikes girl |
10/10/05 - 03:20AM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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is faith evil again? it sounds like she is. i love dawn and xander together, i remember when she had a crush on him, but i never really thought about them as a couple, though i pulled it off and made it seem so natural/
Author's Response: I'm not at liberty to say, weather Faith, is evil, or not, but she is up to something. I'm glad you like Xander, and Dawn, I did it, because I think they would have gotten togeher if the show hade stayed on. (Watch season seven again sometime, they were going there). Thanks. |
| Timan |
10/10/05 - 02:28AM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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The slayers are really working for evil. that is such a cool idea and if you think about it it does make sense. i always wondered about that whole "one girl in all the world" thing. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yes, one Slayer really isn't enough is it. Which is why I liked the end of the show (though I know some people didn't) on the other hand, You can't change the rules like that, and expected no repercutions, which is where this story comes from. Thanks for reviewing. |
| redmoon |
09/21/05 - 03:51PM |
5: They buy it every time. |
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"...biggest fight since the Devil bitch slapped God..." LOL! Nice lead up to the next armageddon and I love the explanation as to the 'real' job of the Slayer. Also, the added info on the RighteouSlayerMob's conversion tactic (old fashioned brain washing) seems to hint at something deeper... perhaps something we've seen before? Update soon!!!
Author's Response: It was a great line wasn't it? If I'm only rememberd for one line, I want that to be it. I never understood, jow One Slayer could stop all the evil in the world (since she wasn't that much stronger than the avrege demon), Plus I liked the Idea of the Buffyverse, crossing over with the real world, and see what normal people think of this crazyness. (I mean Crazyness in a good way) Thanks for reviewing. |
| redmoon |
09/05/05 - 10:16PM |
4: Trial by fire, part 2. |
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Great chapter. As for the slight crossover...? Does Jason perhaps have a pet bird,a painted face and a vendetta? We'll see. Update soon!
Author's Response: Pet birl HA HA. No dude, Crow's just his last name. The crossover was just for that one chapter. I hope people will like Jason, because he'll be aroun for awile. Thanks for the review. |
| BtVS Air |
09/05/05 - 12:26AM |
1: Pray for mercy |
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oh my! buffy was brainwashed? please update soon!
Author's Response: Well, teacnicaly yes, she was brainwashed into believing Dawn was her sister (wasn't really Dawn's fault, but thats what happened). Or do you mean the Slayer cult brainwashed her? that I can't tell you yet. Thanks for reviewing. |
| redmoon |
08/24/05 - 10:41PM |
2: Trust. |
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Hmm... veeeery interesting... Buffy's gone all Caleb on us, has she? And I think it's cute that Dawn ends up with her first crush. Well put together. Update soon!
Author's Response: In future chapters, I'll explain why Buffy might go all Caleb, But reamember, we don't know for sure yet. We just know (PAY ATTENTION, THIS IS THE ONLY HINT, I'M GIVING YOU!) that it's a character, that Joss Whedon created. Thanks for the review. |
| Psyche2 |
08/24/05 - 10:00PM |
1: Pray for mercy |
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Interesting start......I can't wait to read what's next!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'll probably start wrighting the next chaper, after I finnish the next chapter of South of Heaven. |
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