Reviews for Unmask
| Icequeen |
02/25/06 - 09:14PM |
14: When Love, and Hate Colide. |
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| I'm going to go on a whim and say that Buffy isn't the person...or maybe it will be her! Either way I really like how the story is going so far. |
| StrugglingHero |
02/14/06 - 09:34PM |
14: When Love, and Hate Colide. |
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Hi. I just want to say I like it. I'm beginning to think that it's the real Buffy.
By the way, do you know any stories that is kind of like this, Buffy is in the dark side? I'm beginning to like those lkind of stories.
Author's Response: The only one I can think off, is Boys, and a Girls, by 1980. In which Buffy, and Willow are evil. As for this one, I hope I can keep you guesing, until the end. Thanks for reading. |
| Icequeen |
02/13/06 - 01:13PM |
12: Eye of the Beholder. |
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| angel! yay! I was wondering what happened to him. |
| Icequeen |
02/13/06 - 12:53PM |
7: The War Begins. |
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YOU KILLED GILES!! :(
Author's Response: Someone finnaly said something about Giles! When I did this, I expected to get a lot of anger, NOTHING! Yeah poor Giles, but someone had to die. And at least one more persons going to die, before this is over. Thanks for reading |
| redmoon |
02/12/06 - 01:43PM |
14: When Love, and Hate Colide. |
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| On the other hand, an actual battle might show us readers once and for all which side Buffy is fighting on - or if there are two of them, or whatnot. Bring it on! |
| Timan |
02/12/06 - 05:00AM |
14: When Love, and Hate Colide. |
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| oooooo War sounds bad. Evil Buffy is gonna do a lot of damage. great job |
| redmoon |
01/29/06 - 06:09PM |
13: Unfaded. |
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| So that was who Faith was talking to. Okay, now only Oz is potentially evil... well, and Buffy. Always Buffy. Buffy, what's up with you? You're hurting my brain. Keep it up! |
| Timan |
01/28/06 - 11:05PM |
13: Unfaded. |
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| So Cordy saved everyone after the fight at the end of not fade away huh? so is Buffy good or evil now cause there's evidence either way. good job |
| MissEdith |
01/28/06 - 10:10PM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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Uh oh, things are not looking good for Faith. Or Willow, seeing as how she's helpless and alone with Faith, who is looking pretty darn suspicious at the moment. Anyway, I like this story a lot so far (I'm about to fall asleep, so I'll read the rest later) but I have 2 complaints. 1) the formatting in this chapter made me sad. Sometimes it was hard to tell who was talking. 2) I thought Sara broke Dawn's arm?
Author's Response: DAMN! I forgot that! It was about a month, between the chaptres, and it wasn't a huge plot point, so I forgot. Sorry. By the way, I went back, and changed it, so it says, she kickd Dawn, into the wall. As for the format, you'll be happy to know, I don't use it anymore. I though it'd make it easier to read, but looking back, it was a bad idea. Hope you like the new one better, and thanks for reading. |
| MissEdith |
01/28/06 - 10:01PM |
5: They buy it every time. |
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| I'm with redmoon. That line made me happy. I like Jason already. Although I hope this story doesn't conclude with Willow's spell in Chosen being wrong...of course, I have no problem with them doubting their decisions and having lots of angst along the way. |
| twinblade |
01/24/06 - 05:49AM |
12: Eye of the Beholder. |
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| eeep...confusion level at max. |
| Timan |
01/24/06 - 05:43AM |
12: Eye of the Beholder. |
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| So Faith and Angel are evil? Nice plot twist didn't see it coming. hey maybe Faith will die, wow, weird sense of closure. good job |
| Raven |
01/23/06 - 06:56PM |
12: Eye of the Beholder. |
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| I've been following this, for awile, but wasn't logged in. So anyway. good work. I kind of hope Buffy is evil though. (Everyone else, on the show, was evil. It's her turn.) |
| redmoon |
01/21/06 - 10:23PM |
12: Eye of the Beholder. |
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So it's not the First... but OZ is evil... or else everyone but the "badguys" have been brainwashed... And Angel... nice. and CONFUSING! If I wasn't so smart I might be lost right now. Excellent twists and poor Xander: riding the emotional roller coaster - not to mention Buffy: Am I good, am I evil, am I escaping, am I being kidnapped... Did I kill Dawn, is this all a really, really crazy dream... and you were there, and axel was there, and beer is good and the moon was red.... there's no place like home, there's no place like home!
Author's Response: Man, I think this story is worth doing, just to read your responses. (There Funny as Hell) Thinks will (probably) make sense by the end. But I still have ome more surprises, before then. Thanks. |
| Timan |
01/11/06 - 11:38PM |
11: Saving Grace. |
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interesting. loved Jamie's background. keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I wanted to make the R/S/M something more that faceless religious nut. What there doing(athough evil, and misguided) is what they think is right. And I wanted to showe why there dedicated, to (fake, or real) Buffy. In Jamies case, she gave her hope(something she never had). |
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