Reviews for Unmask
| MissEdith |
06/19/06 - 12:08PM |
12: Eye of the Beholder. |
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| I have to say, for such a smart person, Willow is being very dumb. Buffy must be evil because she vanished after Faith took out Kennedy? And I really want to hit Xander...it's called innocent until proven guilty! Judicial system, people! Ok, rant over. |
| Quortoth |
06/18/06 - 07:11PM |
6: I'm sorry. |
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| The format made me have to squint. [Ha, ha, could be me. :-)] I think that Faith gave a good pep talk, and Giles is around. I wonder, how far is Sara going to go with that Scythe too. Good Chapter. |
| Quortoth |
06/18/06 - 07:02PM |
5: They buy it every time. |
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| I liked that line that was previously quoted and Jason seems really cool. He's got the whole super strength thing, cool. :-) |
| Quortoth |
06/07/06 - 12:32PM |
4: Trial by fire, part 2. |
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| I'm liking this Jason guy. He sounds like he's cute. Cool probably. Either way, Great Chapter. |
| Quortoth |
06/07/06 - 10:54AM |
3: Trial by fire. |
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| Like the timing, 7 yrs. into the future. Always good to find out how people have turned out. And that's kind of cool having a cult of slayers, bad ass slayers, a strong hold. I'm like that story a lot, I'm going to read the next one. |
| Quortoth |
06/07/06 - 10:40AM |
2: Trust. |
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| I like that Eore statement, Xander talking about revealing such information getting the WWF. Worring about his other eye. I could imagine those conversations like they were from the other show, Dawn yelling that it wasn't Buffy. That was believable. I'm going to read the next one. |
| Quortoth |
06/07/06 - 10:27AM |
1: Pray for mercy |
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| Ah, suspense, glorious suspense. I've been wanting some, you did a great job. I'm going to read the next one now. |
| redmoon |
05/22/06 - 02:14PM |
19: Judgement Day. |
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It's OVER?? Well, okay, as long as there's a sequel. It was great and loved the new characters you introduced. I'd like to see Kennedy as the badgirl - this will certainly make for an excellent sequel. Good work.
Author's Response: Yes, it's over. I mean since he plot was Buffy possible being evil, I thought it should stop, when we leard the truth. As for thye sequel )Called THE DARK RAPUTE) Wil be a very diffrent stroy. I can't say to much, but it involes the world learning about slayers (and over reacting slightly) Wolfram and hart getting involved. The rules about the First will change. And of coarse what happened at the end. It's going to be a much bigger story. But it may be awile before it comes out (sorry) I want to do it right. Funny it all started as a one shot deal, to answer gumboy's challenge. And now it may be my master piece (Or I might be full of myself. Thanks again |
| redmoon |
05/22/06 - 12:10AM |
19: Judgement Day. |
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Yikes. For a minute there I thought you killed Kenny (you bastards!), but no, she's okay. Well, not okay, but at least not dead. Of course Dawn wakes up after they find evil-buffy's true identity. I loved the Fallen From Grace reference -- except Faith isn't "stumpy" in that series - unless she pulls a Luke Skywalker and gets a prosthetic. I can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: Dude, there's not going to be an update, it's OVER! There is a sequel coming eventualy, but no update. As for Kenny (Or Mary, as she's now know) I don't think it will blow to much to say she'll be one of the bad guys next time. I was just going to kill her, but then I thought it'd be cool to see someone go though the brainwashing process. Now will Willow have to do to Kenny, what Jason did? Stay tuned And thanks for sticking with this, all the way though. |
| spikelover_12 |
04/16/06 - 12:33PM |
18: Behind the Mask. |
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| holly crap justine, i didn't see that comming.i love the story right now, and im really happy that buffy isn't evil. good job cant wait for more |
| Icequeen |
04/16/06 - 11:02AM |
18: Behind the Mask. |
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| damn justine?! I forgot all about her. Great job with that curve ball...I was trying to figure out who it was and I never thought about her. I'm also glad that Buffy isn't evil...ooo Justine is gonna get her ass kicked by angel so bad for killing his son! |
| redmoon |
04/11/06 - 08:24AM |
18: Behind the Mask. |
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| So she's NOT evil!? Phew. Which retroactively means... she didn't stab dawn, and Whistler was really evil: this I can believe. She hinted at being set up from the beginning which sounds like a very interesting story. The Righteous Slayer Mob was duped! And by one of their own! Ha, serves them right, putting their trust in morals and such! That'll teach em. Good work!! |
| redmoon |
04/09/06 - 10:11PM |
17: Loss. |
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Holy crap! Buffy really IS evil? I actually didn't see that coming. You killed them all off! At least Connor got in some death-blows before he went down. And I noticed Spike only passed out, but since everyone else is dead (or is Faith going to survive???) he probably doesn't stand a chance. Somehow I don't have a lot of faith in an operation directed by Cordy, supernatural or not. Glad Oz isn't evil though, but I'm wondering how he and Jason are going to be able to finish this if Buffy and Sara get their way (which it seems that have or soon will). Update soon!!
Author's Response: Yes, I killed them all (well almost) I hated to do it, but there hadn't been enough people to die. By the way, this story is almost done, but I'm planing a sequel, that will deal with everything talked about, here. (Like W/R/H, vs the First. And The world finding out, about slayers.) Can't talk about it now. But by then, well know everything. Be carful what you say about Cordy. She may kick your ass, like Jason. And yes, Oz isn't evil, hust dead. And now he's a guardian Angel, of sorts (Hum, Touched by a Werewolf?) Thanks for reading. |
| Timan |
03/28/06 - 06:50AM |
15: Something else you didn't know. |
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| Love it! it makes perfect sense that Wolfram and Hart made the slayers as a way of dealing with the First Evil. keep it up |
| twinblade |
03/27/06 - 07:47AM |
15: Something else you didn't know. |
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| D@mn and double d@mn. I think the good guys are gonna need some gun-fu to get outta this one. |
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