Reviews for Helping me through
| Angels Shadow |
11/16/05 - 09:36PM |
5: Chapter Four |
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Great action sequence. I was so happy to see Spike. I hope he manages to avoid the stake :) Hey, I'm so happy to see you updated though. I'm really enjoying this story so far. I can't wait to see where you take it from here, so here's hoping you'll update again soon!!
Author's Response: You'll have to wait for the next chapter to see if he dies or not. I hope to be updating again soon. Thanks for the review! |
| filmtheory |
11/14/05 - 02:03AM |
4: Chapter Three |
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Lena’d rather slice her wrists than go out to a party? Yep, that’s addiction. Loved the cliffhanger ending to the chapter. Hopefully kicking a$$ will give this girl something better to do with her life.
Author's Response: Lena is definatly addicted to cutting, there is no doubt about that. Wait until you see what I have in store for her later. Thanks for the review and hope you keep reading. |
| Angels Shadow |
11/08/05 - 06:12AM |
4: Chapter Three |
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I really enjoyed this chapter - great update!! I can't wait to find out more about Lena and to see if Spike will end up saving her :) Again, love the story - hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for Spike saving Lena, you'll just have to wait and see. :) |
| filmtheory |
11/04/05 - 10:59PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Wow! Very short, but very, very intense chapter. I can’t wait to learn more about this very, very troubled slayer. She should definitely make for a very complex and intense character. I have to admit, I literally cringed while reading about the cutting. Your writing is very visceral and descriptive. The next chapter can’t come soon enough.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Honestly, I considered deleting this chapter and re-writing it. I was afriad that it wouldn't work well with the story but it fits her so well. Again, thanks for the review. |
| filmtheory |
10/30/05 - 12:20AM |
2: Chapter One |
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Great chapter. SPike's dream was vivid and I love his posthumous loyalty to Angel. You really dig into the character the way few others have. There's a lot of depth and complexity you show in a brief chapter. Awesome.
Author's Response: Tahnk you. You're one of my favorite author's on this site so i'm honored that you like something I wrote. I have another story that i'm writing with Peaches Girl called A mind is a terible thing..you should check it out and tell us what you think. |
| filmtheory |
10/16/05 - 02:28AM |
1: Prologue |
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| The description of the battlefield was succint, but so deep. I could really see it. Even in a chapte rhts short, you have a seroius cliffhanger. I hope you keep oging with this. |
| axel |
10/11/05 - 04:55PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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| I think the chapter's good. Now we have some Idea, what motivates her, which is important. since it's so short, You could, make it part of the next chapter, if that make you feel better. But I thinks it's fine the way it is. |
| Angels Shadow |
10/06/05 - 07:30PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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| Dark and short, but its good. It definitely leaves a sense of interest as to who this girl is and why she's really doing this to herself. Plus, I think it'll be interesting when you delve deeper into her life and reveal in more depth who abandoned her and why feeling invincible made her seek the Council's training. Very good so far! |
| Angels Shadow |
09/28/05 - 11:59AM |
2: Chapter One |
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Great story ... again, hate that Angel's dead, but I love Spike too, so I'm anxious to see where this ends up, and if he finally gets the guts to go to Buffy and how all that works out. Please update :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Its funny, I love Angel and I have him dead in two of my stories. Maybe one day I'll write one where hes alive. Anyways, thanks for reading. I'm working on the third chapter right now and will have it posted as soon as I finish. |
| axel |
09/15/05 - 05:48PM |
2: Chapter One |
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Spike in Florida? it a little diffent (but then I put Faith, in Tennessee, in my story, so what am I talking about) But I like it so far, and Interesting to see him upset by Angel's death, after all the talk of hating him.
Author's Response: Florida was the first state that I thought of so thats where Spike ended up. LoL. I always said that deep down Spike secretly liked Angel which is why he always talked of hating him. It probably seems weird but it made sense to me. |
| axel |
09/12/05 - 11:17PM |
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| Intresting start, I like to see where it goes, keep it up. |
| BelovedSlayer |
08/13/05 - 01:02PM |
1: Prologue |
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this soun ds really great so far but i wish the chappie was more longer. i hope the vampire doesnt kill angel, i love him 2 much!! lol i hope at least spike will save him. this fic has great potential and im looking forward to reading the next chappie update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I really value you're opinion. I just hope it can turn out as good as Hunter and my others and that other people discover it. |
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